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Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "a flower bazaar"I dare you....
21 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
I enjoyed the poem because it reminded me spring would be coming and all the dreary cold and snow will melt away and we can enjoy the beauty of the flowers. Nicely put together.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed the poem because it reminded me spring would be coming and all the dreary cold and snow will melt away and we can enjoy the beauty of the flowers. Nicely put together.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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and more sneezing and worse itchy, watery eyes.... lol
thank you carol :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
I loved your flower poem. As someone admired flowers for their magnificent and beauty, this was a real treat to me. Beautiful presentation and color choices.
Simply lovely - thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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I loved your flower poem. As someone admired flowers for their magnificent and beauty, this was a real treat to me. Beautiful presentation and color choices.
Simply lovely - thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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thank you em :-)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a beautiful picture and a great poem. A few lines to reveal a story. Your mind is always thinking. Thank you for posting this poem. I want to wish you Good luck. Stay safe. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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This is a beautiful picture and a great poem. A few lines to reveal a story. Your mind is always thinking. Thank you for posting this poem. I want to wish you Good luck. Stay safe. Have a great day.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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thank you carolyn :-)
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You are welcome, busy bee, lol
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
As I was counting Syllables, I was totally interrupted by
your dope skills. For, your poem is hot. Even though I
don't know if it followed all of the rules. But you did your
thing. So Keep Writing. And try not to forget to stop by to
talk. Either way, Stay Connected
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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As I was counting Syllables, I was totally interrupted by
your dope skills. For, your poem is hot. Even though I
don't know if it followed all of the rules. But you did your
thing. So Keep Writing. And try not to forget to stop by to
talk. Either way, Stay Connected
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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lol thank you titan :)
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Beautiful poem. Beautiful scenery of daisies in the foreground and cherry blossoms in the background. This reminds me that every year, we have the Cherry Blossoms festival in our state. Thanks for sharing, Kit
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Beautiful poem. Beautiful scenery of daisies in the foreground and cherry blossoms in the background. This reminds me that every year, we have the Cherry Blossoms festival in our state. Thanks for sharing, Kit
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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thank you kit :-)
Comment from karenina
The only "bad poem" would be the one you had in your heart yet did not express...
You exude joy in your work.
Something this old world could use a bit more of.
This simple verse inspires is to appreciate and value the differences...
Every petal has worth and beauty.
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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The only "bad poem" would be the one you had in your heart yet did not express...
You exude joy in your work.
Something this old world could use a bit more of.
This simple verse inspires is to appreciate and value the differences...
Every petal has worth and beauty.
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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so true! thank you karenina :)
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You are welcome!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Flower Bazaar, uses a neat rhyme scheme and a blithe description to compare and regale these pretty blossoms.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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This poem, A Flower Bazaar, uses a neat rhyme scheme and a blithe description to compare and regale these pretty blossoms.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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thank you bill :-)
Comment from joann r romei
Very nice3, I always wanted to do one of these types of poems, but I can't ever think of one thats good enough to post. Flowers are amazing and the saying stop to smell the roses is an understatement.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Very nice3, I always wanted to do one of these types of poems, but I can't ever think of one thats good enough to post. Flowers are amazing and the saying stop to smell the roses is an understatement.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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lol thank you joann :)
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Shelley, you took the challenge and your wrote a lovely poem.
I especially liked:
daisies are clouds of white
(Shelley, you've made this a tough choice. Whenever I see a daisy,
will I now think of your poem and clouds of white or will I think of
Toms Hanks and Meg Ryan in "You've Got Mail" when Hanks brings Meg Ryan a bouquet of daisies. Meg Ryan says she likes daisies...they are such a friendly flower. So lets see ... clouds of white or a friendly flower.
Touch choice here. Hmmm. Smiles.)
A fun poem. Keep the blue waters flowing. Well chosen artwork.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hi Shelley, you took the challenge and your wrote a lovely poem.
I especially liked:
daisies are clouds of white
(Shelley, you've made this a tough choice. Whenever I see a daisy,
will I now think of your poem and clouds of white or will I think of
Toms Hanks and Meg Ryan in "You've Got Mail" when Hanks brings Meg Ryan a bouquet of daisies. Meg Ryan says she likes daisies...they are such a friendly flower. So lets see ... clouds of white or a friendly flower.
Touch choice here. Hmmm. Smiles.)
A fun poem. Keep the blue waters flowing. Well chosen artwork.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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love that movie! (love tom hanks! lol) thank you lb :)
Comment from royowen
I think a lot of people favour the Daisy as a favoured flower, but personally I much prefer the rose, a symbol of so many things, a most iconic flower indeed, beautifully written my friends, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I think a lot of people favour the Daisy as a favoured flower, but personally I much prefer the rose, a symbol of so many things, a most iconic flower indeed, beautifully written my friends, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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thank you roy :-)
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