A Compilation of Short stories
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9 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I like your personification of Spring. Having Spring hoping for the best is a great image. Thank you for sharing this. Keep up the good work. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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I like your personification of Spring. Having Spring hoping for the best is a great image. Thank you for sharing this. Keep up the good work. Best wishes.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2022
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Thank you so very much. Ulla:)))
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You have a great poem with much thought. The picture is beautiful.
Hopefully, the beauty of spring will return. The weather has been weird. We must hope, and keep the faith. Thank you for the great poem.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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You have a great poem with much thought. The picture is beautiful.
Hopefully, the beauty of spring will return. The weather has been weird. We must hope, and keep the faith. Thank you for the great poem.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much. Nobody really understood the underlying message of my writing.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Spring is in the Air, gives voice to our favorite season, next to summer, autumn, and winter. The others aren't talking though.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This poem, Spring is in the Air, gives voice to our favorite season, next to summer, autumn, and winter. The others aren't talking though.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Does to this mean you understood what I was trying to.say? Nobody else did. Thanks a lot for the review.
Comment from Wendy G
This is an interesting and well written one, and should be a good candidate for success in the contest. Sending you good wishes. (Just edit out the "Of" at the end.)
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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This is an interesting and well written one, and should be a good candidate for success in the contest. Sending you good wishes. (Just edit out the "Of" at the end.)
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, Wendy, this post is rather much looking towards the east of Europe and the threat coming from there. Spring has come to an abrupt halt.
I have removed the 'of'. I have no idea where that came from. Thanks so much again.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like your story because I am waiting for the smell of spring's fresh air and the creeping flowers peeking through the ground and the splashing mud puddle instead of the snow.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I like your story because I am waiting for the smell of spring's fresh air and the creeping flowers peeking through the ground and the splashing mud puddle instead of the snow.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much. But is this really about spring?
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Spring is the name..were you not talking about nature?
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No, not really, I used how spring could have a hard time as a metaphor for what is happening right now in Eastern Europe.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Personification contest. You followed the rules of the contest well.
I like the personification of spring... Very clever.
The story flows nicely and it's easy to follow.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the Personification contest. You followed the rules of the contest well.
I like the personification of spring... Very clever.
The story flows nicely and it's easy to follow.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you much, Marival. Read the notes and you will know what I'm referring to. Thanks again.
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Hola guapa LoL
Comment from Luke Jarret
A lovely and unique personification of Spring. This was a charming read - Thank you for sharing! I read it twice through - always nice to end on a note of hope. It fits the brief well and conjures lovely imagery - Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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A lovely and unique personification of Spring. This was a charming read - Thank you for sharing! I read it twice through - always nice to end on a note of hope. It fits the brief well and conjures lovely imagery - Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thank you so very much. .
Comment from pome lover
This is a lovely poem written in the first person with the character Spring.
If you don't mind, I found two errors - height (needs an "e") and forces over which I have no control.
A neat poem enumerating the pleasures and benefits of Spring.
Sorry you're having harsh weather. Today, in San Antonio we're in the high 70s. Of course, we could get cold again at the drop of a hat.
You got a lot in, in 150 words. good job.
Katharine
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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This is a lovely poem written in the first person with the character Spring.
If you don't mind, I found two errors - height (needs an "e") and forces over which I have no control.
A neat poem enumerating the pleasures and benefits of Spring.
Sorry you're having harsh weather. Today, in San Antonio we're in the high 70s. Of course, we could get cold again at the drop of a hat.
You got a lot in, in 150 words. good job.
Katharine
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, and I made the correction. Thanks for pointing it out.
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most welcome.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Spring is a good choice for the personification contest. However, I feel that this entry could have gone further towards the actuel personification of the season. The author has left the activity of the season as it is, and merely allowed it to talk, in the first person.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Spring is a good choice for the personification contest. However, I feel that this entry could have gone further towards the actuel personification of the season. The author has left the activity of the season as it is, and merely allowed it to talk, in the first person.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Thanks a lot. I see what you're saying, but you seemed to miss the underlying theme.
Also, I only had 150.words to play with. Never mind. It fell flat.
