Challenge Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "in a field of wishes"I dare you....
17 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello again you two. I have to say it's kind refreshingly weird to see a style from you that I'm not use to seeing. Shows you're not a one trick pony or should I say unicorn....lol have a good one.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hello again you two. I have to say it's kind refreshingly weird to see a style from you that I'm not use to seeing. Shows you're not a one trick pony or should I say unicorn....lol have a good one.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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the unicorn is the national animal of scotland :-)
Comment from karenina
I knew you were up to my challenge, by far!
It'd only be proper to give a sixth star...
Yet, alas, it is Friday and mine are all "spent."
Kindly take my applause and sincere compliment!
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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I knew you were up to my challenge, by far!
It'd only be proper to give a sixth star...
Yet, alas, it is Friday and mine are all "spent."
Kindly take my applause and sincere compliment!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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lol i'll take it! if you think of any other challenges, let me know - this one was fun :)
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I see others have offered you knew challenges... If you run out I'll be glad to offer another!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. The image is perfect as is the green background. Really adds to the mood of your words. I also enjoyed the pace and repeat phrase.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The image is perfect as is the green background. Really adds to the mood of your words. I also enjoyed the pace and repeat phrase.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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thank you kl :-)
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
The complication of these types of poems
is what makes the artist hot, when they come
out on top. For, your creativity was dope. Keep Writing.
And don't forget to stop by to talk. For, there is always
something new on deck. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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The complication of these types of poems
is what makes the artist hot, when they come
out on top. For, your creativity was dope. Keep Writing.
And don't forget to stop by to talk. For, there is always
something new on deck. Stay Connected
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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thank you titan :-)
Comment from jessizero
I think you did a wonderful job with this challenge! I liked the imagery and the rhymes. Good job, thanks for sharing, and keep up the excellent work!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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I think you did a wonderful job with this challenge! I liked the imagery and the rhymes. Good job, thanks for sharing, and keep up the excellent work!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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thank you jessi :-)
Comment from Anne Johnston
"watching the birds and enjoying the view
peace and quiet interlace -
hope's alive in a field of wishes where dreams can come true
under a cumulus cloud sky of blue....
Beautiful picture you have chosen and great words you have written. One can just imagine the peace that would be felt in this place.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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"watching the birds and enjoying the view
peace and quiet interlace -
hope's alive in a field of wishes where dreams can come true
under a cumulus cloud sky of blue....
Beautiful picture you have chosen and great words you have written. One can just imagine the peace that would be felt in this place.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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glad you enjoyed the ride! thank you anne :)
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You are welcome, Shelley
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Shelley,
Your inspirational poem lifted me up as I read it this morning.
You've penned an excellent villanelle poem; the photo accentuates the serenity and hope in the tone of your poem.
Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest and with all your writing.
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Shelley,
Your inspirational poem lifted me up as I read it this morning.
You've penned an excellent villanelle poem; the photo accentuates the serenity and hope in the tone of your poem.
Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest and with all your writing.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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cool! thank you cindy :)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Hopes alive in a field of wishes where dreams can come true
I love that line and this is a beautifully penned villanelle poem.I think you definitely passed the challenge. Cheers
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Hopes alive in a field of wishes where dreams can come true
I love that line and this is a beautifully penned villanelle poem.I think you definitely passed the challenge. Cheers
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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thank you pearl :-)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
For sure. A field of wishes, or visions. Those clouds above the wide-open field, bring back memories. Only, the grass in your picture is much greener. There is silence allowing the mind to wander. You have written a great poem with meaning. Thank you for this poem in a field of wishes.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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For sure. A field of wishes, or visions. Those clouds above the wide-open field, bring back memories. Only, the grass in your picture is much greener. There is silence allowing the mind to wander. You have written a great poem with meaning. Thank you for this poem in a field of wishes.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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thank you carolyn - glad you enjoyed it :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very well done traditional verse on finding peace in nature's solitude. I especially like the last stanza
watching the birds and enjoying the view
peace and quiet interlace -
hope's alive in a field of wishes where dreams can come true
under a cumulus cloud sky of blue....
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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very well done traditional verse on finding peace in nature's solitude. I especially like the last stanza
watching the birds and enjoying the view
peace and quiet interlace -
hope's alive in a field of wishes where dreams can come true
under a cumulus cloud sky of blue....
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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thank you jake :-)
