Challenge Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "it's just another day of writing"I dare you....
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Comment from karenina
So why was I looking backwards anyway? Oh! Subliminal Shelley got one over on me! That was kick! Not entirely sure writing a poem about your titles is getting away from YOU.... But hey, it's your bat and ball! Hit it where you want it! :)
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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So why was I looking backwards anyway? Oh! Subliminal Shelley got one over on me! That was kick! Not entirely sure writing a poem about your titles is getting away from YOU.... But hey, it's your bat and ball! Hit it where you want it! :)
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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LOL! thank you karenina :)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You do have a great imagination. I enjoy reading your work. Keep up the great writing. You are very talented. Stay safe, good luck. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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You do have a great imagination. I enjoy reading your work. Keep up the great writing. You are very talented. Stay safe, good luck. Have a great day.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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hehe thank you carolyn :-)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this challenge. I think you sort of passed. Thank you for letting me drop by and read this poem. LOl You are so talented. I doubt you're capable of writing a bad poem.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading this challenge. I think you sort of passed. Thank you for letting me drop by and read this poem. LOl You are so talented. I doubt you're capable of writing a bad poem.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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thank you barbara :)
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, though I think you may have failed the challenge "not about me" A young girls (daughter) hopes and wishes seem to be guided by a mothers love, protection, and care, and if you are the mother, your wonderful words have failed with pride, a beautiful read, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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Excellent, though I think you may have failed the challenge "not about me" A young girls (daughter) hopes and wishes seem to be guided by a mothers love, protection, and care, and if you are the mother, your wonderful words have failed with pride, a beautiful read, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2022
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lol thank you kahpot :-)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
it's just another day of writing
by shelley kaye
I love the way you write. You are so creative and versatile. This poem is very unique and I like your approach. Challenging yourself or following somebody's challenge is a good way to generate poems. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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it's just another day of writing
by shelley kaye
I love the way you write. You are so creative and versatile. This poem is very unique and I like your approach. Challenging yourself or following somebody's challenge is a good way to generate poems. Well done!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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thank you gypsy :-)
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This is a great poem, due to way you dropped it. For example,
You words were expressions of what a artist would ask him/herself
when they are stuck inside of the real of having "Writers Block". And
this is a extremely creative way of breaking out of it. Nice job. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk to me. There's always something new on deck. Stay Connected
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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This is a great poem, due to way you dropped it. For example,
You words were expressions of what a artist would ask him/herself
when they are stuck inside of the real of having "Writers Block". And
this is a extremely creative way of breaking out of it. Nice job. Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk to me. There's always something new on deck. Stay Connected
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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thank you titan :-)
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
What a great poem! Well done with the prompt. Seems like you had fun with the challenge. It's very creatively done. I enjoyed the dark background with the light text. The combination works well.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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What a great poem! Well done with the prompt. Seems like you had fun with the challenge. It's very creatively done. I enjoyed the dark background with the light text. The combination works well.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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pink is my fave colour lol
thank you kl :-)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
By using poem titles, you have created a sort of stream-of -consciousness
style piece with some vivid metaphors--some whimsical, some thought-provoking, some I didn't "get."
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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By using poem titles, you have created a sort of stream-of -consciousness
style piece with some vivid metaphors--some whimsical, some thought-provoking, some I didn't "get."
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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lol and i didn't even use all the titles either! thank you janice
also wrote a senryu (love lost) -- i just joined the "haiku club" here on fs.... there's lots of pics - gotta catch up LOL
Comment from John Ciarmello
I think you passed, but barely my friend, Shelley kaye, lol. I absolutely love the way you experiment with words and styles. There is nothing wooden about your writing. It passes us like the mist on a breeze. You are the real thing!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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I think you passed, but barely my friend, Shelley kaye, lol. I absolutely love the way you experiment with words and styles. There is nothing wooden about your writing. It passes us like the mist on a breeze. You are the real thing!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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lol thank you john :)
Comment from Mia Twysted
The piece has a quick pace to it helped by the shortened sentences. It feels like walking on air or just floating around in the pool on a lazy day enjoying the wonders around you.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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The piece has a quick pace to it helped by the shortened sentences. It feels like walking on air or just floating around in the pool on a lazy day enjoying the wonders around you.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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hehe thank you mia :)
