God On Deen
God whispers to Deen's son Jeen35 total reviews
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Wow!!! When it's time to get spiritual, you don't play,
huh? And it is obvious, that you have no problem with
giving God the glory. And that's what really held the
readers attention. Nice job. Keep Writing. And don't
forget to stop by to talk to me. Stay Connected
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Wow!!! When it's time to get spiritual, you don't play,
huh? And it is obvious, that you have no problem with
giving God the glory. And that's what really held the
readers attention. Nice job. Keep Writing. And don't
forget to stop by to talk to me. Stay Connected
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is so beautiful! The imagery in such few words is astounding. I took the ending as a reincarnation of Jeen's father. This is well written, and every word well chosen. Great read
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This is so beautiful! The imagery in such few words is astounding. I took the ending as a reincarnation of Jeen's father. This is well written, and every word well chosen. Great read
Comment Written 10-Feb-2022
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
I think this was brilliant from the beginning to the end I was captivated to the Writer I take my hat off this is a very unique and good peace keep up the good work God-bless and have a beautiful day
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I think this was brilliant from the beginning to the end I was captivated to the Writer I take my hat off this is a very unique and good peace keep up the good work God-bless and have a beautiful day
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
Comment from rspoet
Hello Alcreator,
This is another excellent short story.
I'm not sure if Dean and Deen are the same person or two different people,
but God responds to his son Jeen's prayer and grants a rebirth in time.
Deen is a fortunate man to have such a wonderful loving son,
just as God planned in the beginning.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Hello Alcreator,
This is another excellent short story.
I'm not sure if Dean and Deen are the same person or two different people,
but God responds to his son Jeen's prayer and grants a rebirth in time.
Deen is a fortunate man to have such a wonderful loving son,
just as God planned in the beginning.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
Comment from karenina
I can't help but wonder if you are mourning b the loss of a friend or family member due to covid? This is the second of two spiritual contest entries and not which you inserted the Covid virus. Would this not have been as strong or stronger in if not injected with the divisive topic of Covid vaccines?
Karenina
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I can't help but wonder if you are mourning b the loss of a friend or family member due to covid? This is the second of two spiritual contest entries and not which you inserted the Covid virus. Would this not have been as strong or stronger in if not injected with the divisive topic of Covid vaccines?
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Feb-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, some people are getting the virus in spite of two shots and a booster.
Most of them aren't dying. Believers have the comfort of knowing they're going to Heaven regardless of how they die. Your writing is descriptive and moving.
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Yes, some people are getting the virus in spite of two shots and a booster.
Most of them aren't dying. Believers have the comfort of knowing they're going to Heaven regardless of how they die. Your writing is descriptive and moving.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great entry for the 39 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. Good form according to the contest requirements.
Some people like to believe in angels, it gives them hope.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Great entry for the 39 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. Good form according to the contest requirements.
Some people like to believe in angels, it gives them hope.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Good luck and congratulations for the many books you note as being written. Prez. of Ind (India?) Is that where you are? If so, what is the definition of rebirth to the differing castes today? If you aren't then forgive my ramblings.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Good luck and congratulations for the many books you note as being written. Prez. of Ind (India?) Is that where you are? If so, what is the definition of rebirth to the differing castes today? If you aren't then forgive my ramblings.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
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Thanks a lot for writing this.
Sorry, I need clarifications, your words are not clear and complete; please, please and please, clarify if you have any point;
These lines are not clear to me; please explain and clarify, if you know, I would be glad to learn from you.
You are wise, aged and much elder to me, please explain what you have tried to mean and clarify to make me understand you.
What do you mean here?
If so, what is the definition of rebirth to the differing castes today? If you aren't then forgive my ramblings.
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-nine-word spiritual story, God on Deen, has the proper word count and gives the readers a scene which finds the faithful one taken to glory at the end. Nice,
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This thirty-nine-word spiritual story, God on Deen, has the proper word count and gives the readers a scene which finds the faithful one taken to glory at the end. Nice,
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Patty Palmer
I thought this poem of 39 words including certain words being used per the direction of the prompt. I think you did a great job on this! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
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I thought this poem of 39 words including certain words being used per the direction of the prompt. I think you did a great job on this! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
