The Pretty Kitty
The City Kitty19 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Congratulations on your runaway win with this entertaining entry! Repetition is a proven strategy to get kids to remember, so your story is a great way to get phoneme variations noticed... as well as providing a tongue-twister challenge for parents reading this aloud to children.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Congratulations on your runaway win with this entertaining entry! Repetition is a proven strategy to get kids to remember, so your story is a great way to get phoneme variations noticed... as well as providing a tongue-twister challenge for parents reading this aloud to children.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Yes, it did turn out to be a bit of a tongue twister! I got carried away,lol! Thank you for this review. I am glad it entertained you:)
Tina
Comment from Patty Palmer
I can't begin to really know how this contest would be like to try and write a story for it. Your story was like reading a tongue twister. I actually read it out loud to try it out as a tongue twister. It worked! My tongue twisted and buckled and I sat here and chuckled! Very entertaining not just for kids but this adult got a thrill out of it. LOL Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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I can't begin to really know how this contest would be like to try and write a story for it. Your story was like reading a tongue twister. I actually read it out loud to try it out as a tongue twister. It worked! My tongue twisted and buckled and I sat here and chuckled! Very entertaining not just for kids but this adult got a thrill out of it. LOL Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your rhymed review! I'm glad you had fun with it!
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's cute, and it certainly meets the requirements for the contest. You may have a winner. I wonder if Sissy could convince my pretty itty bitty kitties to wear their hats! For some reason they don't want to. LOL
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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That's cute, and it certainly meets the requirements for the contest. You may have a winner. I wonder if Sissy could convince my pretty itty bitty kitties to wear their hats! For some reason they don't want to. LOL
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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haha...I will ask her to intervene! Thank you for the review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful story about a prissy, pretty, itty bitty kitty... it's adorable. The presentation is awesome too. You incorporated phonics into your story. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Great entry for the Phonics and Phonemes Challenge contest.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Beautiful story about a prissy, pretty, itty bitty kitty... it's adorable. The presentation is awesome too. You incorporated phonics into your story. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Great entry for the Phonics and Phonemes Challenge contest.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much.
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This was definitely a challenge with the short vowel phonemes of i and a all through the story of cats and their shenanigans! The artwork is fun as is the children's tale about the kitties who want to wear hats in the city!
Thanks for posting this informational story for little children who need help with their vowel sounds!
Happy 2022!
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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This was definitely a challenge with the short vowel phonemes of i and a all through the story of cats and their shenanigans! The artwork is fun as is the children's tale about the kitties who want to wear hats in the city!
Thanks for posting this informational story for little children who need help with their vowel sounds!
Happy 2022!
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming whimsy--quite a tongue-twisting tale. Delightful rhyme will surely be a hit--suggestion: print copies with outline of cat for school children to color!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Charming whimsy--quite a tongue-twisting tale. Delightful rhyme will surely be a hit--suggestion: print copies with outline of cat for school children to color!
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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I like the suggestion! Thank you!
Comment from Teri7
This is a really cute and well written story you have penned for the challenge. You used very good descriptive words and phonemes. Very sweet picture you chose too. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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This is a really cute and well written story you have penned for the challenge. You used very good descriptive words and phonemes. Very sweet picture you chose too. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from 1Dreamer
Wow, loved this piece and I can hear children giggling as it's read to them. Loved your creativity and the repetition (LOL, made me want to take a breath at the end of reading it). Best wishes for a win!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Wow, loved this piece and I can hear children giggling as it's read to them. Loved your creativity and the repetition (LOL, made me want to take a breath at the end of reading it). Best wishes for a win!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow! Phonetic rhyming at its best.
I loved the tale which fits the contest well.
The image is delightful and I see young readers having lots of fun with rhyme.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Wow! Phonetic rhyming at its best.
I loved the tale which fits the contest well.
The image is delightful and I see young readers having lots of fun with rhyme.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from GollyGreen32
Hi! I loved your story. The phonics and phonemes felt natural and fun. I liked how Sissy wanted a hat to look prettier, and I liked the ending. It made me laugh. Great job on the story. Have a blessed and Merry Christmas!
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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Hi! I loved your story. The phonics and phonemes felt natural and fun. I liked how Sissy wanted a hat to look prettier, and I liked the ending. It made me laugh. Great job on the story. Have a blessed and Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
