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My Father's Figure

Becoming like my Dad every day.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Life in the mirror, our truth on our face -
Uncompromisingly, my bedroom mirror reflect my father's ageing figure- Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
    Life in the mirror indeed - thank you.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Very nice one sentence. It must arouse many emotions in you - according to the feelings you have for your father. You have subtly imbued your work with bits of fear at being like him. Growing older comes with some yucky stuff we don't even want to look at, but when we come to the point where we learn to live with it - we are happier. Nice work!

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
    Thank you Sherry - you are spot on there.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Yes, it's natural and happens to all of us. Your contest entry was fun to read. Your words are well thought out. I would add 's' to reflect.

Also, this is a blind contest, so remove your name ASAP.
Best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Thank you Jan.
Comment from Taminang Therese N
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It sounds like when you see yourself in your bedroom mirror, you see that you resemble your father as he was at his aging stage. I use to think of my grandmom I grew with and imagine if I shall attend her age. It's quite interesting to see things this way. Thanks for writing and sharing. Success in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Thank you.