Comment from Lexia Prime

Poor

The author expressed pain clearly, yet she or he fell below the mark with word choice and rhyme scheme. The final stanza seems to have a word missing (pray) and uses "brought" instead of "bough."

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021

Occasionally I'll Rush something and I'll be tired and I won't have a chance to do a complete edit and review.
I will say this that I've never given a poor review to anybody here I've been here over a decade and I never will especially because of an earth and grammar.
Everybody has their own particular styles and everybody here presents it their own special way.
After you've been here a while you'll learn to it except that but as for now unfortunately I can't have you reviewing my work so you have been blocked.
Which according to our wonderful leader Tom Enis.
I have every right and you haven't written a word?
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A poignant write, Ricky, about an unbelievably tragic event that continues to haunt every moment of your life. The loss of a son must be one of the hardest things to bear.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021

I just got a poor review from a new writer because of a couple Grammar Errors.
See this from people who just start out here on fan story and they don't have any credits of course.
So I put them in the cornfield where they belong!
And thanks for your wonderful review!
Doctor Ricky 1024