Miracles Unseen
A Rondaful38 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
good presentation.
-You did a good job
with the form and topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme,
and the repeating lines work very well.
-I like all of the nature imagery
and how you think about "the
small miracles in Nature's world."
-Very good concluding couplet, too.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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-Nice image and
good presentation.
-You did a good job
with the form and topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme,
and the repeating lines work very well.
-I like all of the nature imagery
and how you think about "the
small miracles in Nature's world."
-Very good concluding couplet, too.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Pam. I appreciate that. Where have you been lately?
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an super job with a complicated new style, Yvonne. I loved reading it. Your picture choice is beautiful and perfect for your well thought out nature poem. I like the rhyme scheme and the color scheme, too. You are right with everything you mentioned. So many miss the little things in nature because they don't slow sown to closely observe. There is something new to be seen almost everywhere everyday. You are an AWESOME author of nature poems.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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You did an super job with a complicated new style, Yvonne. I loved reading it. Your picture choice is beautiful and perfect for your well thought out nature poem. I like the rhyme scheme and the color scheme, too. You are right with everything you mentioned. So many miss the little things in nature because they don't slow sown to closely observe. There is something new to be seen almost everywhere everyday. You are an AWESOME author of nature poems.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Awwww, how can I thank you enough for these wonderful comments? I appreciate them no end.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
These mysteries...I wonder how they are unseen
in Nature's world, these mysteries...beautiful! I know Dolly well and she would definately approve of this wonderful poem. It is creative and much enjoyed by me...wonderful. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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These mysteries...I wonder how they are unseen
in Nature's world, these mysteries...beautiful! I know Dolly well and she would definately approve of this wonderful poem. It is creative and much enjoyed by me...wonderful. Well done kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Yvonne,
This seems like an interesting repetitive form. It seems to make you write very tersely (if that's a word).
It reminds us to look at and listen to nature carefully so we don't miss the beauty and the marvels of nature.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Yvonne,
This seems like an interesting repetitive form. It seems to make you write very tersely (if that's a word).
It reminds us to look at and listen to nature carefully so we don't miss the beauty and the marvels of nature.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays
Joan
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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You got it! Thanks, Joan.
You're welcome, Yvonne.
Joan
Comment from moongirlwriter
Wow. . .you have tackled a huge discipline. For me it would be anyway and did it beautifully. I must admit, I didn't count. I simply enjoyed the little miracle of the wind as it passes me by. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Wow. . .you have tackled a huge discipline. For me it would be anyway and did it beautifully. I must admit, I didn't count. I simply enjoyed the little miracle of the wind as it passes me by. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments.
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Comment from judiverse
Love it! This is beautifully written, and I say you did justice to the Rondaful. Great work, as the repeating lines are lovely. Nature's world, as you indicate, is full of miracles that are unseen. I like your example of the breeze blowing, whispering, touching blossoms, but it's unseen. judi
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Love it! This is beautifully written, and I say you did justice to the Rondaful. Great work, as the repeating lines are lovely. Nature's world, as you indicate, is full of miracles that are unseen. I like your example of the breeze blowing, whispering, touching blossoms, but it's unseen. judi
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Judi. This means a lot.
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You're welcome. A superb job. judi
Comment from Sherry Asbury
You have done splendidly. Dolly will be proud of you. Your artwork just compelled me to think about nature as I planted bulbs all day...will they bloom in the moonlight or wait for the warmth of day? This is just lovely!
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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You have done splendidly. Dolly will be proud of you. Your artwork just compelled me to think about nature as I planted bulbs all day...will they bloom in the moonlight or wait for the warmth of day? This is just lovely!
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Sherry. I planted some bulbs this week as well. Hope they bloom next year.
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I even got a bulb I can't remember - you start it inside first. I also planted daffodil bulbs and others I can't call to mind - bad day for some reason.
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I've done that and had to wait to see what it was when it bloomed. hahahaha
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I bought 10 bulbs and they all look alike...except the Amaryllis, I got and planted today...it is huge.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Although you missed the internal (a) (how) rhyme on the first line, to be repeated at the end of the eighth line, and the end of last line on this Rondaful, I still enjoyed your version of it. I thought you did a great job, it's not an easy form, I still think you deserve a six for it because it is a beautiful poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Although you missed the internal (a) (how) rhyme on the first line, to be repeated at the end of the eighth line, and the end of last line on this Rondaful, I still enjoyed your version of it. I thought you did a great job, it's not an easy form, I still think you deserve a six for it because it is a beautiful poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for this. I'll take a look at it and maybe I can repair it somehow. If not, I'll try better next time.
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Only make the changes if you think it will improve because it is truly a magical write and well deserving of a six x x x
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How kind of you. I'll do better next try.
