Miracles Unseen
A Rondaful38 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
This is the second rondaful I have read tonight and I love the format! Will have to give it a try. This was a beautiful piece highlighting the unseen miracles that surround us. If we just take the time to really look and feel the love evident in creation, there would be more joy in the world.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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This is the second rondaful I have read tonight and I love the format! Will have to give it a try. This was a beautiful piece highlighting the unseen miracles that surround us. If we just take the time to really look and feel the love evident in creation, there would be more joy in the world.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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I'm glad you agree. We're in too much of a hurry to enjoy the little miracles around us. Thank you, June.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is another lovely Nature poem Yvonne. Unfortunately, Nature's mysteries and wonder remain unseen to some, like you,, I think those people miss so much by not opening up to Nature's miracles. Lovely,
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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This is another lovely Nature poem Yvonne. Unfortunately, Nature's mysteries and wonder remain unseen to some, like you,, I think those people miss so much by not opening up to Nature's miracles. Lovely,
cheers
valda
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I knew you felt the same about nature.
Comment from Terry Broxson
What a very creative poem you have written. After reading your notes I went back and reread it with the last two lines first, I see how it's done, very cool. When I read it (both times) it reminded my of a song by the Grateful Dead...Ripple. Good job.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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What a very creative poem you have written. After reading your notes I went back and reread it with the last two lines first, I see how it's done, very cool. When I read it (both times) it reminded my of a song by the Grateful Dead...Ripple. Good job.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful execution of Dolly's Rondaful form, Yvonne! I love how lovely your meter matches the reflective tone of the marveling about Nature's unseen mysteries!!
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Beautiful execution of Dolly's Rondaful form, Yvonne! I love how lovely your meter matches the reflective tone of the marveling about Nature's unseen mysteries!!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Helen. That means a lot.
Comment from nomi338
What you are witnessing are some of the mysteries of God our wonderful creator. So many miracles that occur in our lives moment to moment are unseen, but profoundly felt. We are wonderfully blessed.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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What you are witnessing are some of the mysteries of God our wonderful creator. So many miracles that occur in our lives moment to moment are unseen, but profoundly felt. We are wonderfully blessed.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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So true. I see them every day. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Patty Palmer
It seems like you did the Rondaful, very well. Your words are easy to read and easy to understand. The words also flow easily. The picture that you chose enhances your poem nicely.
Patty
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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It seems like you did the Rondaful, very well. Your words are easy to read and easy to understand. The words also flow easily. The picture that you chose enhances your poem nicely.
Patty
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Sally Law
As I said in your birthday tribute, no form is too difficult for you. Please accept a virtual six for this. I saw that Dolly had posted one of these. Just lovely, Yvonne.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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As I said in your birthday tribute, no form is too difficult for you. Please accept a virtual six for this. I saw that Dolly had posted one of these. Just lovely, Yvonne.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much. I hope I can l live up to the confidence you have in me. I'd like to be a great prose writer like yourself, but that's not to be. I am very happy with a virtual six from you.
Comment from royowen
I think you've worked it out fine, I think one would have pick the theme, because of the changing meter, it's a little stilted, but as always your articulation and your knowledge of poetry is always good, well done Yvonne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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I think you've worked it out fine, I think one would have pick the theme, because of the changing meter, it's a little stilted, but as always your articulation and your knowledge of poetry is always good, well done Yvonne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for saying such lovely things. You always make one feel so good.
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Well done
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This morning, the lady doing Children's Corner asked the little ones how many of them had seen the wind. Some hands went up. Of course, she explained that "mystery" of the wind to them--that they just see things moved by the wind and they feel the wind touching them. Your poem is lovel and appealing.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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This morning, the lady doing Children's Corner asked the little ones how many of them had seen the wind. Some hands went up. Of course, she explained that "mystery" of the wind to them--that they just see things moved by the wind and they feel the wind touching them. Your poem is lovel and appealing.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you. What a coincidence of subjects. I like her explanation.
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a lovely poem, and you have done well on this different style. Just think of all the precious treasures we can find as we look at all the things that God created in nature for us to enjoy. Mysteries, but ones He is glad to reveal if we search carefully.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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This is a lovely poem, and you have done well on this different style. Just think of all the precious treasures we can find as we look at all the things that God created in nature for us to enjoy. Mysteries, but ones He is glad to reveal if we search carefully.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Oh, thank you, Anne, for this wonderful review. Yes, they're there waiting to be found.
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You are welcome
