Miracles Unseen
A Rondaful38 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
I was thinking about the words of Jesus when describing the spirit with leaves and wind. Another existence is not seen with the naked eye, but you know it is there. Well done, Arkie.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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I was thinking about the words of Jesus when describing the spirit with leaves and wind. Another existence is not seen with the naked eye, but you know it is there. Well done, Arkie.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Absolutely! Thank you.
Comment from Paul McFarland
The tiny miracles of Nature. These are so often overlooked by us. But, as you say, they can be seen if you look hard enough.
The miracles of Nature do abound.
Some large enough for all of us to see.
But some so small that they cannot be found
Until we clear away our own debris.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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The tiny miracles of Nature. These are so often overlooked by us. But, as you say, they can be seen if you look hard enough.
The miracles of Nature do abound.
Some large enough for all of us to see.
But some so small that they cannot be found
Until we clear away our own debris.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Your poem says it all. We only have to look around. Thank you.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gorgeous. Brilliant conception of unseen wonders--with clever lead-in with the gentle breeze being unheard but for a whisper! Elegant and graceful verse.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Gorgeous. Brilliant conception of unseen wonders--with clever lead-in with the gentle breeze being unheard but for a whisper! Elegant and graceful verse.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Janetsue
This is beautifully written in a form I am not familiar with, but enjoyed encountering. Your sensory imagery is excellent and lends extra interest to the message. The Author Notes are very much appreciated.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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This is beautifully written in a form I am not familiar with, but enjoyed encountering. Your sensory imagery is excellent and lends extra interest to the message. The Author Notes are very much appreciated.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne.
The content of this poem deals with ethereal matters of unseen things in nature. They are hard to explain even when they are visible. It's difficult to explain how the wind blows but it's certainly easy to see the effects of it as you so aptly stated in your poem.
Robert
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Hello Yvonne.
The content of this poem deals with ethereal matters of unseen things in nature. They are hard to explain even when they are visible. It's difficult to explain how the wind blows but it's certainly easy to see the effects of it as you so aptly stated in your poem.
Robert
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Robert.
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You're welcome
Comment from Boogienights
We have the ability to feel the wind but can't see it, you have stated this idea beautifully in your poem. What an incredible world we live in, I'm so grateful for it. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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We have the ability to feel the wind but can't see it, you have stated this idea beautifully in your poem. What an incredible world we live in, I'm so grateful for it. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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It is an incredible world. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from 1Dreamer
Loved this. Makes me want to spend more time being quiet and observing more of God's gifts to us in nature. With the world as crazy as it is, this brought me peace and desire to just be quiet and listen.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Loved this. Makes me want to spend more time being quiet and observing more of God's gifts to us in nature. With the world as crazy as it is, this brought me peace and desire to just be quiet and listen.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this. We need a quiet time to appreciate what nature has to offer.
Comment from zanya
The theme here of this brand new format is awe-inspiring -the miracles to be found in Nature which we so often miss or maybe even ignore -thanks for reminding us!!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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The theme here of this brand new format is awe-inspiring -the miracles to be found in Nature which we so often miss or maybe even ignore -thanks for reminding us!!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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I'm glad if I did. There is so much beauty around us if we take time to look. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,
I wonder how they are unseen
in Nature's world, these mysteries....
Awesome job on this!! May God forever bless you and your family!!!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Dear author,
I wonder how they are unseen
in Nature's world, these mysteries....
Awesome job on this!! May God forever bless you and your family!!!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you. The same to you and yours.
Comment from Pantygynt
You have 'modified' this slightly I see. The fourth syllable of the first line should be an 'a' rhyme but how doesnt rhyme with mysteries. These things aree difficult to tie down in all respects and you have made an honest attempt at a complex form
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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You have 'modified' this slightly I see. The fourth syllable of the first line should be an 'a' rhyme but how doesnt rhyme with mysteries. These things aree difficult to tie down in all respects and you have made an honest attempt at a complex form
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Jim.
