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Consumed

Mother Nature is losing the fight.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Your literary techniques of personification and animation will draw the reader in. This cautionary tale can also be a strong metaphor. Some readers may identify with this sense of life's defeat. This challenges the reader to search for hope & resiliency in all of this.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Word Junkie
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Hi Mia,

This is a siccinct commentary on the state of our planet today. You chose your words, image, and background color well and the effect is a gut-punch that will, hopefully, make every reader resolve to do his or her part to avert the coming catastrophe.

Well done and write on!
~Lana

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
    Thank you. I hope we can repair the damage we have done.
Comment from Raul1
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You're right This is how sometimes nature acts with its wickedness. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
    Thank you. I am honored you enjoyed the piece.
reply by Raul1 on 03-Nov-2021
    You're welcome!