Autumn's Wardrobe Change
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Autumn's Wardrobe Change, presented in four quatrains, shows an obedient leafy army falling at request to blanket the kingdom with gold before the winter comes. Nice.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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This poem, Autumn's Wardrobe Change, presented in four quatrains, shows an obedient leafy army falling at request to blanket the kingdom with gold before the winter comes. Nice.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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What a lovely description. Thank you.
Comment from AnnieDawn
Very appropriate as fall is finally here. I do not like raking the leaves but think it is the most colorful season of them all. You have captured this season really well in this poem and I loved reading it. In fact, I actually read it several times it is that good. Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Very appropriate as fall is finally here. I do not like raking the leaves but think it is the most colorful season of them all. You have captured this season really well in this poem and I loved reading it. In fact, I actually read it several times it is that good. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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You did? Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Paul McFarland
A very nice description of autumn. The second stanza is the strongest with a really great simile.
The hardwood trees all lose their crown
When autumn leaves come drifting down.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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A very nice description of autumn. The second stanza is the strongest with a really great simile.
The hardwood trees all lose their crown
When autumn leaves come drifting down.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this great review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine nature write about the Autumnal season and the preparation for winter.
This line for me is out of meter, but I expect it depends on pronunciation. Foliage has 3 syllables, but I expect you pronounce it with two here:
When foliage tumbles to the ground
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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A fine nature write about the Autumnal season and the preparation for winter.
This line for me is out of meter, but I expect it depends on pronunciation. Foliage has 3 syllables, but I expect you pronounce it with two here:
When foliage tumbles to the ground
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you. Yes, you're right. Down here, foliage is a two-syllable word. 8-)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem for the season of autumn such a pretty time of year. Very nice presentation it has a nice flow and rhyme. Great photo choice compliments our words so well. ð???
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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This is a beautifully written poem for the season of autumn such a pretty time of year. Very nice presentation it has a nice flow and rhyme. Great photo choice compliments our words so well. ð???
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thank you. I so appreciate your lovely comments.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is exceptional in every respect. You have used an expressive, colorful array of figures of speech--metaphor, simile, personification--to describe late fall and winter.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Your poem is exceptional in every respect. You have used an expressive, colorful array of figures of speech--metaphor, simile, personification--to describe late fall and winter.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Janice. I appreciate this great review so much!
Comment from Ben Colder
Are you guys getting color change yet in your trees? Still green here, but I bet they are starting to turn up at my place at Greers Ferry. Good tribute to the Fall season.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Are you guys getting color change yet in your trees? Still green here, but I bet they are starting to turn up at my place at Greers Ferry. Good tribute to the Fall season.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review and stars! Not a lot of change in color, but some. Won't be long now, I hope, until Fall is here!
Comment from Mary Shifman
Your poem is lovely and I enjoyed reading it. I love the rhyme. The meter gives it a lyrical sound and the imagery if wonderful. The picture caught my attention immediately. I love this tine of year.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Your poem is lovely and I enjoyed reading it. I love the rhyme. The meter gives it a lyrical sound and the imagery if wonderful. The picture caught my attention immediately. I love this tine of year.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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I do, too. Thank you, Mary.
Yvonne
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You are welcome.
Comment from BethShelby
It is an excellent fall poem. I appreciate you holding it. I think everyone iw rushing a season I don't look forward to. Here in the south fall and winter are slow in coming and nothing has changed here yet, although it won't be long. I really like this well-rhymed poem. It reads very smoothly.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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It is an excellent fall poem. I appreciate you holding it. I think everyone iw rushing a season I don't look forward to. Here in the south fall and winter are slow in coming and nothing has changed here yet, although it won't be long. I really like this well-rhymed poem. It reads very smoothly.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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I'm in Arkansas, and while things haven't changed much, I can feel it in the cooler days. You're probably going to think I'm weird, but I love autumn and winter, my favorites. Thank you for a great review. 8-)
Yvonne
Comment from aryr
Winter has come, damommy. I loved the picture and of course the rhyme. Your words definitely showed that the seasons have and will change and only time and Mother Nature will tell. Great job, and very well enjoyed.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Winter has come, damommy. I loved the picture and of course the rhyme. Your words definitely showed that the seasons have and will change and only time and Mother Nature will tell. Great job, and very well enjoyed.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thank you. It's finally looking like autumn here, and I'm so glad.
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You are so welcome, Yvonne, just remember that autumn is always followed by winter, lol. You may be glad now but wait until the winter.
