His Secrets Bind Her
5/7/5/7/7 Tanka for the Japanese Poetry Club16 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for telling us what the word penumbras means. I was stumped on that one as I am not hear a dictionary today. We are taking are of Greyson and its hard to navigate on line and look things up. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Gypsy, This is a very well written Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for telling us what the word penumbras means. I was stumped on that one as I am not hear a dictionary today. We are taking are of Greyson and its hard to navigate on line and look things up. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That's such a sad situation for those ladies. But concubines or "mistresses" were part of society during Victorian days in Europe where a gentleman married for status but kept a mistress for love.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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That's such a sad situation for those ladies. But concubines or "mistresses" were part of society during Victorian days in Europe where a gentleman married for status but kept a mistress for love.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. It's good to hear from you. It's your trip over?
Gypsy hugs
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Yes, we got back yesterday! 💖
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Comment from rspoet
Hello Gypsy,
I like this tanka very much. It has marvelous concise description
that tells a subtle story not only of the individual, but the culture.
The third line forms an excellent pivot between the two sections,
while the last line is a wonderful insight. Penumbras hide many secrets.
Gorgeous art work to match the poem.
Beautiful work.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Hello Gypsy,
I like this tanka very much. It has marvelous concise description
that tells a subtle story not only of the individual, but the culture.
The third line forms an excellent pivot between the two sections,
while the last line is a wonderful insight. Penumbras hide many secrets.
Gorgeous art work to match the poem.
Beautiful work.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much, Robert, your exceptional review and six stars mean a lot to me. May you have a wonderful day, my friend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Eternal Muse
I wish I had a six left for this. This is magnificent. The imagery is stunning as are the words. Superb imagery and visuals.
Bravo!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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I wish I had a six left for this. This is magnificent. The imagery is stunning as are the words. Superb imagery and visuals.
Bravo!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from kahpot
The life of a concubine may take a lifetime to achieve, what a wonderful description of a concubine, an excellent tanka poem, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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The life of a concubine may take a lifetime to achieve, what a wonderful description of a concubine, an excellent tanka poem, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your excellent review. I appreciate it.
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Comment from Sherry Asbury
Exquisite picture that speaks loudly. How sad it must have been to be a concubine, yet even that station in life was better than poverty. Women have had to endure much to survive. Your poem fits the parameters perfectly and I really enjoyed this!
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Exquisite picture that speaks loudly. How sad it must have been to be a concubine, yet even that station in life was better than poverty. Women have had to endure much to survive. Your poem fits the parameters perfectly and I really enjoyed this!
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
An intriguing poem accompanied by an equally intriguing photo of a geisha. This enhances the impact of the Tanka poem. I enjoyed it and am inspired to attempt a few in the coming days. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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An intriguing poem accompanied by an equally intriguing photo of a geisha. This enhances the impact of the Tanka poem. I enjoyed it and am inspired to attempt a few in the coming days. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a subtle and gentle write about a harsh and painful situation, you delivered your words with finesse and skill here, a joy to read, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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This is a subtle and gentle write about a harsh and painful situation, you delivered your words with finesse and skill here, a joy to read, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from amahra
That's a very beautiful image you've chosen for your poem. I love the poem though its topic, sad that young women were treated so harshly in many parts of the world; and some places even today.
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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That's a very beautiful image you've chosen for your poem. I love the poem though its topic, sad that young women were treated so harshly in many parts of the world; and some places even today.
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Gloria ....
And what a fine tanka this is. It addresses loneliness, but in a resigned manner, as this is the duty of the concubine. To live in the shadows a forever secret that he may grow tired of or grow out of like a toy.
Beautifully written, Gypsy and many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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And what a fine tanka this is. It addresses loneliness, but in a resigned manner, as this is the duty of the concubine. To live in the shadows a forever secret that he may grow tired of or grow out of like a toy.
Beautifully written, Gypsy and many thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 31-May-2021
reply by the author on 31-May-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
