storm
a haiku3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
Very good writing, my friend. I found your catured the readers attention from the first line! Distant thunder rolls is imaginable and the graphic you chose helps the reader feel the emotion of your short story. Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Very good writing, my friend. I found your catured the readers attention from the first line! Distant thunder rolls is imaginable and the graphic you chose helps the reader feel the emotion of your short story. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Thank you so much! I appreciate it.
Comment from RodG
It's only early Spring and already there is drought in many areas. Your haiku describes the wonderful benefits of rain as it drenches arid soil and produces this wonderful "earthy scent." Rod
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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It's only early Spring and already there is drought in many areas. Your haiku describes the wonderful benefits of rain as it drenches arid soil and produces this wonderful "earthy scent." Rod
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Thank you!!
Comment from Sharon Davis
A well written 5-7-5
responding to the prompted topic- nature, that describes a storm with rich sensory vocabulary- arid, earthy sense. An enjoyable read. Great job
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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A well written 5-7-5
responding to the prompted topic- nature, that describes a storm with rich sensory vocabulary- arid, earthy sense. An enjoyable read. Great job
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Thank you!!
