A Mother's Love
The cycle of life a Roundabout poem11 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely Roundabout poem about a mother's love, your mother's love. Though gone, they still stay with us. A lovely presentation just one typo - verse 2 refrain line -she'll mends
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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A lovely Roundabout poem about a mother's love, your mother's love. Though gone, they still stay with us. A lovely presentation just one typo - verse 2 refrain line -she'll mends
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Thank you, Pearl, :) you made my day. I'll correct that error.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written tribute to your mom. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. It is sad. It's so sad without a mom on mother's day ð???. I only lost mom a year ago. It's just not the same. Very beautiful photo to compliment your words. Well done. Beautiful photo to compliment your words.
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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This is a beautifully written tribute to your mom. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. It is sad. It's so sad without a mom on mother's day ð???. I only lost mom a year ago. It's just not the same. Very beautiful photo to compliment your words. Well done. Beautiful photo to compliment your words.
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Thank you, Joanne. I'm sorry about your loss. It is sad, but she will always be in our hearts.
Comment from aryr
Definitely a great tribute to your mother, Jose. I loved the picture and your words. Even though at the end it was sad, it was a wonderful picture that you painted with your words. Very well done.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Definitely a great tribute to your mother, Jose. I loved the picture and your words. Even though at the end it was sad, it was a wonderful picture that you painted with your words. Very well done.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you, Alie. :) Just something to write.
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You are most welcome Jose.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a beautiful poem. And every word is the truth about a mother. The tenderness of a mother's love and touch. You know she will always be there. She is dependable always. Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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This is a beautiful poem. And every word is the truth about a mother. The tenderness of a mother's love and touch. You know she will always be there. She is dependable always. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you, Patty. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet and sentimental write about the power of being a Mother and how we enjoy the love of our Mothers and remember them forever, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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A sweet and sentimental write about the power of being a Mother and how we enjoy the love of our Mothers and remember them forever, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you, Dolly. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are beautiful, heartfelt and creative. I thought about
my own Mom as I read these lovely words. I agree with the author as
there is no love like a mother's love. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is precious and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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The author's words are beautiful, heartfelt and creative. I thought about
my own Mom as I read these lovely words. I agree with the author as
there is no love like a mother's love. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is precious and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you, Harmony. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from lyenochka
I don't feel this is sad - this poem is heartwarming and comes from your heart. I loved that your mother has that "Mona Lisa" smile and that she's always with you even though she's in Heaven. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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I don't feel this is sad - this poem is heartwarming and comes from your heart. I loved that your mother has that "Mona Lisa" smile and that she's always with you even though she's in Heaven. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you, Helen. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Raul1
This is great that you've dedicated this poem to your mom. I love my mom too! She is caring and kind. I think your mom was kind and caring too. thank you for sharing this kind poem.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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This is great that you've dedicated this poem to your mom. I love my mom too! She is caring and kind. I think your mom was kind and caring too. thank you for sharing this kind poem.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thanks, Raul. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Begin Again
Maybe it seems like it's sad, but it also a tribute to a lifetime of love and giving until she is carried away by the angels. From the moment we are born, we know the love of our mother and even after she is gone...her love will still be there. Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Maybe it seems like it's sad, but it also a tribute to a lifetime of love and giving until she is carried away by the angels. From the moment we are born, we know the love of our mother and even after she is gone...her love will still be there. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you, Carol. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Anne Johnston
A beautiful poem about a mother's love. It is a bit sad, but proclaims a great message of how a mother loves her children, and nurtures them from birth.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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A beautiful poem about a mother's love. It is a bit sad, but proclaims a great message of how a mother loves her children, and nurtures them from birth.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you, Anne. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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You are welcome
