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Jackie and Shadow Saga

continues ..see cute video below.

3 total reviews 
Comment from rhonnie69
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Ciao Tempeste: I like your posting here in that I admire the manner in which you encourage your reader to follow the example of your characters. I get the picture here. That's life. I believe that during our life time we all need a nest-egg to cheer us along. I thank you for keeping me up dated with, "Jackie and Shadow." They sort of remind me of, "Me and my Shadow." God bless you, Tempeste. cordially. :rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 16-May-2021

Comment from Gregory Lambert
Good
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Hi, I like your poem Jackie and Shadow Saga. Great subject and nice imagery. Not sure what "ov" is though. I thought it might be an acronym, but when I looked it up there are almost 40 acronyms for "ov" and I'm not sure which one applies. Sorry if this is something obvious that I should know. Otherwise, well done!

 Comment Written 08-May-2021


reply by the author on 08-May-2021
    Thank you for reading my poem .. ov is OVER ..

    I too before posting checked if written like that was okay ..

    I found two links that listed OV as an abbreviation of OVER

    I hope you enjoyed the video below .. Jackie and Shadow have a huge fan base and their webcam is on 24/7 .. they are so cute ..love watching them interact

    Keep safe !
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Excellent
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Begin a-new: "a seasoned couple
spat ov where new branch fits best
~ Jackie has last say ~" - so the life can re-start with a new batch of babies. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2021


reply by the author on 08-May-2021
    Thank you for the review

    .. for this year there will be no more babies ..too late in the season ...but fixing up the nest will certainly strengthen their bond .. they have been a couple for 3 years now .

    Keep safe !

reply by Iza Deleanu on 08-May-2021
    so cute
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
    I totally agree ..Shadow is a very loving partner and the couple have a huge fan base ..their webcam

    just above their nest

    is on 24/7 ..I love dropping in and watching them interact.

    Keep safe !