Four Seasons in the Caribbean
Portmanteau 5-7-5, see notes6 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz1
Painting a beautiful world in soft hues. Wouldn't it be nice if only we could. But then that is why we have our imaginations and words to take us there. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Painting a beautiful world in soft hues. Wouldn't it be nice if only we could. But then that is why we have our imaginations and words to take us there. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Thank you. Yes, it would be lovely! I appreciate the rating and comments. Hugs.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have a figure of speech I have not seen in this contest. Your alliteration immediately draws the reader in. This literary technique creates a more vivid imagery for your lovely scene. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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You have a figure of speech I have not seen in this contest. Your alliteration immediately draws the reader in. This literary technique creates a more vivid imagery for your lovely scene. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Thank you. Much appreciated comments and review. Hugs.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture... wonderful vacation area. The contents of the poem are wonderful; "bathed in turquoise pool
pink clouds peek through verdant palms
glamping with my love..."
I want to be there unfortunately due to Covid, travel is restricted.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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I like the picture... wonderful vacation area. The contents of the poem are wonderful; "bathed in turquoise pool
pink clouds peek through verdant palms
glamping with my love..."
I want to be there unfortunately due to Covid, travel is restricted.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. I would love to be there too, as where I am right now is very cold and sloppy. :-) Hugs.
Comment from Elsa Bensi
This is a beautiful poem, it made me think that love is glamorous and just as glamour it isn't given to all. We are gifted. Thank you for this thought! I'll open my window and I'll breathe it in.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a beautiful poem, it made me think that love is glamorous and just as glamour it isn't given to all. We are gifted. Thank you for this thought! I'll open my window and I'll breathe it in.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you! Your review was very poetic, and I appreciate your words. Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your word for the poem, too.
-Effective imagery describing
the pool, clouds, and palms
with all of the colors, including 'verdant'.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your word for the poem, too.
-Effective imagery describing
the pool, clouds, and palms
with all of the colors, including 'verdant'.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Drat! You are right! Thank you for pointing that out. Back to the drawing board. Hugs.
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You are very welcome and did a great job. I revised your review; I think you will like it:)
Comment from zanya
Yes this seems to be the idea that is being explored in this poetry clue 'glamping ' fits in appropriately and matches the sentiments being expressed
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Yes this seems to be the idea that is being explored in this poetry clue 'glamping ' fits in appropriately and matches the sentiments being expressed
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the rating and comments. Appreciated. Hugs.
