Divine Connection
Analogy- A perfect purpose, is why we are meant to meet.24 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, all have connections and each connection has purpose and meaning. I like the image of the bee and its connection with the flower, important and life-sustaining, looking at the bigger picture. Well written.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Yes, all have connections and each connection has purpose and meaning. I like the image of the bee and its connection with the flower, important and life-sustaining, looking at the bigger picture. Well written.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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My sincerest thanks to you for sharing your kind thoughts and wonderful review on my poem. Enjoy your day.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks there is truly a natural divine connection between the bees and warm wild honey, heavenly sweet, their meeting is under the control of the Only Creator God; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This poem speaks there is truly a natural divine connection between the bees and warm wild honey, heavenly sweet, their meeting is under the control of the Only Creator God; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Many thanks to you for sharing your kind thoughts and great review on my poem. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the title:Connection. The picture is a nice choice... It odes show the connection.
The poems written as: "Warm wild honey. So Heavenly sweet.
Divine connection. We are meant to meet."
I like "so sweet... and ... meant to meet." That is well written. It is naturally connected.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I like the title:Connection. The picture is a nice choice... It odes show the connection.
The poems written as: "Warm wild honey. So Heavenly sweet.
Divine connection. We are meant to meet."
I like "so sweet... and ... meant to meet." That is well written. It is naturally connected.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much for your kind comments and terrific review. Enjoy your day.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a prefect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
She having a good time eating the honey
Thank you for sharing,
Cookie
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a prefect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
She having a good time eating the honey
Thank you for sharing,
Cookie
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts with this very kind review. I am happy that you enjoyed it.
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Your very welcome, take care.
Cookie
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a very nice poem about how everything and everyone is meant to meet for a reason. I believe this too, that God is directing what goes on according to his plan.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a very nice poem about how everything and everyone is meant to meet for a reason. I believe this too, that God is directing what goes on according to his plan.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Many thanks to you, for sharing your wonderful thoughts with this great review. Much appreciation.
Comment from jenintorre
Great photo and presentation. I am glad you described the meaning of this poem in your notes. I wish you lots of luck in the take a photo competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Great photo and presentation. I am glad you described the meaning of this poem in your notes. I wish you lots of luck in the take a photo competition. Jen.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much for sharing your thoughts about my poem and your wishes for luck in the contest.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I hate bees but I love this. This is a good reminder to me of why I have to tolerate them. I'm not a huge honey person but every once in awhile, in the right thing, it can be good.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I hate bees but I love this. This is a good reminder to me of why I have to tolerate them. I'm not a huge honey person but every once in awhile, in the right thing, it can be good.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your thoughts on my poem. It actually is meant to be an analogy in regards to who we connect with throughout life is never an accident, but a perfect plan with perfect reasons. Lol! Thanks again.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. I enjoyed the
read of this poem. The poem flows and connects we. The artwork
is perfect and compliments both the theme of these words.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. I enjoyed the
read of this poem. The poem flows and connects we. The artwork
is perfect and compliments both the theme of these words.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful thoughts and kind compliments with this review. Much appreciated.
Comment from E. Denison
Updated review: within the context of the author notes I can see the larger analogy. The beauty of poems this length is that they can have multiple analogies as well as the more superficial reading. I can only apologize that I didnā??t delve into the possible nuances with this work on the first read and limited my interpretation to the surface level. I blame a distracting Saturday (haha). Thank you for providing context to your work and providing a second chance to look into its deeper meanings.
Original review: what a great little poem. It's interesting, this is the second poem referencing honey I've read today - both wonderful in their own way. I think we are all looking forward to spring! Well written with a lovely photo too. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Updated review: within the context of the author notes I can see the larger analogy. The beauty of poems this length is that they can have multiple analogies as well as the more superficial reading. I can only apologize that I didnā??t delve into the possible nuances with this work on the first read and limited my interpretation to the surface level. I blame a distracting Saturday (haha). Thank you for providing context to your work and providing a second chance to look into its deeper meanings.
Original review: what a great little poem. It's interesting, this is the second poem referencing honey I've read today - both wonderful in their own way. I think we are all looking forward to spring! Well written with a lovely photo too. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much for taking the time to re-read my poem. I am glad that by adding the author notes, there is a bit clearer perspective to my intended message. So grateful.
Comment from RetroStarfish
This is a lovely little poem with such a deep meaning. Your photo is fantastic. I'm glad you "met" that busy bee. In addition to making honey, bees "meet" up with plants, pollinating flowers and other flora, which we also enjoy. I don't know if you intended this further meaning - but it struck me. Your poem is wonderful. T thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a lovely little poem with such a deep meaning. Your photo is fantastic. I'm glad you "met" that busy bee. In addition to making honey, bees "meet" up with plants, pollinating flowers and other flora, which we also enjoy. I don't know if you intended this further meaning - but it struck me. Your poem is wonderful. T thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much for this great review. Actually, I did go into my poem and edit the author notes in order to clarify my intended message. Thank you again.
