Breezy Smile!
Breezy Smile has a Catchy Style!47 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
RPSaxena,
The two line poem contest did not give you much to work with,
but you sure made a big splash with it! You made it pretty easy for reviewers here > "two lines with six syllables per line, each containing an internal rhyme and an ending rhyme." Very cool though and I like your use of "high" used two times.
Impacting presentation as well,
Anna
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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RPSaxena,
The two line poem contest did not give you much to work with,
but you sure made a big splash with it! You made it pretty easy for reviewers here > "two lines with six syllables per line, each containing an internal rhyme and an ending rhyme." Very cool though and I like your use of "high" used two times.
Impacting presentation as well,
Anna
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Hello Anna,
What a PLEASANT SURPRISE this is!
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Breezy Smile!
RPSaxena your two line gave me chill when you wrote how the mountains so dark and dismal
Your rhyming is perfect.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Breezy Smile!
RPSaxena your two line gave me chill when you wrote how the mountains so dark and dismal
Your rhyming is perfect.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Hello Gert Sherwood,
What a pleasant surprise this is!
I'm EXTREMELY SORRY to react so late.
Thank you very much for your uplifting comments.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Hello
RPSaxena
better late then never
You are So welcome
Gert
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Hi Gert,
Thanks a lot for your so POSITIVE Approach!
Take care. With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are most welcome RPSaxena
Comment from sunnilicious
You have plenty going on in this short poem. The lyrical flow with rhythm and rhymes is apparent. The alliteration drips with H, T and S words. And there's internal rhyming with blow-sow. As you end rhyme pretty -ills. Hahahahaha :)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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You have plenty going on in this short poem. The lyrical flow with rhythm and rhymes is apparent. The alliteration drips with H, T and S words. And there's internal rhyming with blow-sow. As you end rhyme pretty -ills. Hahahahaha :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Hi Sunnilicious,
What a wonderful review this is!
Thank you very much for your detailed, so lovely, and uplifting comments backed by the most coveted SIX STARS.
It's really a PLEASANT SURPRISE because the poem, by now, has become a part of history.
As a matter of fact, I'm not finding appropriate words to express my THANKS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from robyn corum
RP,
I gotta tell you honestly, though I like most of your stuff, I just didn't get this one. I understood the first line and thought that was quite clever. The second line flew past my head like a jet airplane. Can you help?
I will assume it's me and not deduct a star. Thanks!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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RP,
I gotta tell you honestly, though I like most of your stuff, I just didn't get this one. I understood the first line and thought that was quite clever. The second line flew past my head like a jet airplane. Can you help?
I will assume it's me and not deduct a star. Thanks!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Robyn Corum,
Thank you very much for reading, and so nice comments.
Please go through these words, and everything you will find crystal clear:
Meaning of 'High winds blow on high hills.' It means that the ones who are at the top are the most exposed to criticism and attacks from others. If you are at the top, don't be surprised that the number of people trying to get you down is far higher than when you were on a lower rung of the societal ladder.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Rhaguvir, this is a great two line essence poem. I loved it. It stirs up such an array of images, which is very difficult to do in so few words. This is a great contender and a great poem. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Wow, Rhaguvir, this is a great two line essence poem. I loved it. It stirs up such an array of images, which is very difficult to do in so few words. This is a great contender and a great poem. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Ulla,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments backed by 'Good Luck' in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Carol Clark2
This short poem is thought-provoking. I like the internal and external rhymes, and the poem flows well also. Best wishes in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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This short poem is thought-provoking. I like the internal and external rhymes, and the poem flows well also. Best wishes in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Carol Clark2,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments backed by 'Best wishes in the contest.'
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very well written two line poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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This is a very nice and very well written two line poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Teri7,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments backed by 'Best Wishes in the contest.'
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Patricia Cammish
This is a neat package of illustration and text.
Your mountains certainly indicate 'seeds of thrills' - if you like jumping out of helicopters wearing skis, which is what springs to mind.
Is that what turns you on?
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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This is a neat package of illustration and text.
Your mountains certainly indicate 'seeds of thrills' - if you like jumping out of helicopters wearing skis, which is what springs to mind.
Is that what turns you on?
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hi Patricia Cammish,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments backed by 'Good Luck in the contest.'
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, high winds in the mountains can cause thrills like wild winds pushing you down a hill while skiing or maybe help an avalanche speed down the hills.
Nicely done two line poem. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dp
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Yes, high winds in the mountains can cause thrills like wild winds pushing you down a hill while skiing or maybe help an avalanche speed down the hills.
Nicely done two line poem. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dp
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi Dragonpoet,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments backed by 'Good Luck in the contest.'
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You're welcome on all accounts, RP
dp
Comment from QC Poet
Nicely written poem connecting part of a majestic process of our Mother Earth. Creative description incorporating the waves an fun side of our at times destructive forces that can turn on humans. Excellent two line entry. Best of Luck in the Contest.
Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Nicely written poem connecting part of a majestic process of our Mother Earth. Creative description incorporating the waves an fun side of our at times destructive forces that can turn on humans. Excellent two line entry. Best of Luck in the Contest.
Blessings to you.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hi OC Poet,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and uplifting comments backed by 'Best of Luck in the contest.'
With best wishes,
~ RP
