Comment from George Santhosh

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this touching dedication for your Son. A beautiful imagery of a journey you have painted. Keep writing.

A few possible corrections:
* Broken of Heart -> Broken Heart
* Dear Lord of God above -> Remove 'of'
* When you're Heart of Hearts is broken -> When 'your' Heart
* To the Dtars and Back -> Stars and Back
* I also noticed many words to have been capitalized unnecessarily, request you to have a look.

I pray hidden happiness to be on its way to your life sir.
Wishing for your smile.
George

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

Thanks George for your comments but we all have unique writings and unique way of expressing our feelings.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

What tragedy you have overcome in such a short span of time. Your work shows great courage and fortitude and is inspiring to many who have shared loss as well. Thank you for sharing. xo

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

When I first lost my son and started writing only three weeks afterwards on his Dell computer
Yes, to honor him.
I soon realized that journaling is the greatest way.
Thanks left-handed!
Ricky

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Such a very sad post. Losing both your son and your dear wife, you have certainly known extreme suffering. Thank you for a well written piece. It is deeply moving.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020

I so enjoyed writing this Wendy gave me great solitude.
Ricky