Another Life
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
You've developed your characters well. It is endearing to hear how well Paul and Crista communicate. It is nice to hear how she notice Paul's kindness. With the other two fellows, it is fun to hear their bantering.
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You've developed your characters well. It is endearing to hear how well Paul and Crista communicate. It is nice to hear how she notice Paul's kindness. With the other two fellows, it is fun to hear their bantering.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2021
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear lancellot, this story is going a lot deeper than I ever suspected. For the first time I have learned about Paul's ability to regenerate. This brings a whole new dimension into this story. Is it witch craft or of alien intervention? Sounds like Paul knows how this came about. How long before we are told too?
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Dear lancellot, this story is going a lot deeper than I ever suspected. For the first time I have learned about Paul's ability to regenerate. This brings a whole new dimension into this story. Is it witch craft or of alien intervention? Sounds like Paul knows how this came about. How long before we are told too?
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Thank you. No, he doesn't know yet. He hasn't put much thought in Crista's assessment yet, but he is curious in what his mother knows, at this point.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Interesting chapter. I enjoyed it as a stand-alone although I missed the earlier chapters. The dialogues really put me in the middle of the action and brought back the memories of my good old days to some extent. Testosterone levels make all the difference. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Interesting chapter. I enjoyed it as a stand-alone although I missed the earlier chapters. The dialogues really put me in the middle of the action and brought back the memories of my good old days to some extent. Testosterone levels make all the difference. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Thank you. Yes, youth and testosterone. Those were the days.
Comment from Jay Squires
I think I need to go back and read the chapters about Paul's reincarnation from Derrick. I know there is a connection with the underground subway system in San Diego, so he was reincarnated in the same geographical location.
This chapter was cleanly written and very entertaining. The way you describe Crista, she's cute as a button. Now, damn it, don't let anything happen to her!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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I think I need to go back and read the chapters about Paul's reincarnation from Derrick. I know there is a connection with the underground subway system in San Diego, so he was reincarnated in the same geographical location.
This chapter was cleanly written and very entertaining. The way you describe Crista, she's cute as a button. Now, damn it, don't let anything happen to her!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much, Jay.
Comment from royowen
I'm enjoying this freewheeling novel you're writing, I read similar things back in my thirties in another life, another place. But things have changed, broadened, I read Herbert, Asimov, Wyndham, Tolkien, CS Lewis back then, always had a liking for science fantasy/fiction. This is along those lines, well done, good job, blessings Roy
Typo : Offer me to(o) many men.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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I'm enjoying this freewheeling novel you're writing, I read similar things back in my thirties in another life, another place. But things have changed, broadened, I read Herbert, Asimov, Wyndham, Tolkien, CS Lewis back then, always had a liking for science fantasy/fiction. This is along those lines, well done, good job, blessings Roy
Typo : Offer me to(o) many men.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Roy. I enjoyed reading them too. They kept me company during the hard years.
Comment from judiverse
Parcell and Algar are so absorbed with sex they may not function too well as squires. Parcell is doing some good thinking when he says he wouldn't want to take Jamie and then leave her a widow. Besides, they have to stay on the good side of Lecher and they may be in for it if they spend too much time with the mermaids. Crista knows a bit about Paul's past life, but she doesn't seem to comprehend it. I don't know how he puts up with Crista calling him master. Paul's taking his responsibilities pretty seriously for someone so young. Great chapter. The boys are like the ace pilots in wartime. They like to strut their stuff. Makes them irresistible to the girls. judi
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Parcell and Algar are so absorbed with sex they may not function too well as squires. Parcell is doing some good thinking when he says he wouldn't want to take Jamie and then leave her a widow. Besides, they have to stay on the good side of Lecher and they may be in for it if they spend too much time with the mermaids. Crista knows a bit about Paul's past life, but she doesn't seem to comprehend it. I don't know how he puts up with Crista calling him master. Paul's taking his responsibilities pretty seriously for someone so young. Great chapter. The boys are like the ace pilots in wartime. They like to strut their stuff. Makes them irresistible to the girls. judi
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Judi. I like that. Ace pilots. I guess they are right now.
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Your welcome. These boys would have had the same swagger. judi
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Canterbury Tales, move over! Lancellot's in the house. Well done.
He simply didn't have the heart to tell her [that] if she was [had been] a he, as Paul had first assumed [comma] he would have likely killed her too.
Clients [clients'] secrets.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Canterbury Tales, move over! Lancellot's in the house. Well done.
He simply didn't have the heart to tell her [that] if she was [had been] a he, as Paul had first assumed [comma] he would have likely killed her too.
Clients [clients'] secrets.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much. I don't think Gillespie need worry about me. But, I'm glad you like, the calm before the storm so far. The dark clouds are coming.
