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A New Park

A Novo Otto for Potlatch Poetry

27 total reviews 
Comment from JLR
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Thank you for this great club challenge and displaying a perfect Nove Otto that clearly displays the form created by Scott Alcorn. Your challenge is well represented by the number of successful entries. Great read, great subject, great graphic.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the compliments. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This nove otto, A New Park, has the proper formatting and suggests that we might actually be able to create a dinosaur from its DNA for real. Hmmm?

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
    Wouldn't that be fun? To see dinosaurs for real. Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Mastery
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Interesting notion, Yvonne. As a matter of fact, I think that is exactly what was done in that movie, wasn't it? DNA? Would that not be a hoot? Imagine that seriously, Wow. Good write, my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
    I think it would be fun to see them for real. Thanks, Bob.
reply by Mastery on 01-Nov-2020
    Me too, :) Bob
reply by Mastery on 01-Nov-2020
    Me too, :) Bob
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Nove Otto poem about the dinosaur generation that may be revived from their DNA one day and roam the earth once more and we may be distinct.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
    Ooops! Hadn't thought of that. I was thinking more of a park where we could see them. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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Absolutely fantastic rendition of the Nove Otto poem. I loved your light, airy rhymes and flow, your superb artistic presentation and artwork. You've complied with the form rules to a "t".

Thank you for the wonderful reading experience.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
    Thank you for a nice review.
Comment from June Sargent
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Biy, my grandson would love this one! He wants his own Jurassic Park! Great entry for he challenge. Nice rhythm and rhyme. As always, you make it all seem so easy!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
    He and I will have to get together and figure out this cloning business. lol. Thanks, June.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness, what a thought? To bring back the dinosaurs! This is a fun write, perfectly formed and rhymed and ideal for the club event, my first six of the week goes to you, a magical write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
    Wow! Thank you so much. Wouldn't a park like be fun?
Comment from l.raven
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HI Yvonne, I have thought about that myself...
if they ever got their hands on the DNA could
they clone dinosaurs...my grandson would be in
his glory...and most likely make friends with them...
I love your poem my sweet friend...a poem for thought...
and love the picture...very well written sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo Happy Halloween...

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
    June Sargent mentioned her grandson would like one. I'll have to get together with them. Thanks, Linda.
reply by l.raven on 01-Nov-2020
    your so welcome Yvonne...love xxoo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Yvonne.

This is an interesting story with an interesting picture. I hope no one else decides to start a Jurassic Park. Michael Crichton's sort of spoiled it for me.

I will not be back here until Tuesday because of the problems I mentioned earlier.



 Comment Written 01-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
    Thanks for reviewing. See you when you return.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 01-Nov-2020
    You're welcome Yvonne.

    Unbelievably, I was napping in the dark family room today and nearly jumped of of my skin. The power came on. I forgot how quiet it was without all the noise makers in a house. I won't ask why. The internet even came back up. What a day. :-)))

    Robert
Comment from aryr
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This was enjoyable to read and rather informative as well. I liked the Nove Otto form and your explanation of such. I liked the topic you chose, perhaps we could one day have our own Jurassic Park, lol.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
    Wouldn't that be fun? Thanks for reviewing.
reply by aryr on 31-Oct-2020
    It would definitely be interesting.
reply by aryr on 31-Oct-2020
    It would definitely be interesting.