Eternal sparks.
Josiah (Jo-Jo)110 total reviews
Comment from seaglass
A lovely tribute to your grandson who is filling his destiny. The aabb rhyming pattern is smooth and the meter makes it pleasant to the reader.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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A lovely tribute to your grandson who is filling his destiny. The aabb rhyming pattern is smooth and the meter makes it pleasant to the reader.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for the great review and comments. Blessing Roy.
Comment from Geoff Wiles
Very well written. You express your thoughts admirably. This will be something for a child to cherish as he gets older. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Very well written. You express your thoughts admirably. This will be something for a child to cherish as he gets older. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you Geoff, for the lovely review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from emrpoems
What a wonderful testimony in your author's notes. i agree that Josiah had to be created for a purpose. I know how proud you must feel to have a grandson like him. He will depend on your guidance and good nurturing to help him fulfill that purpose
Good use of rhymes couplets and enjambment
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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What a wonderful testimony in your author's notes. i agree that Josiah had to be created for a purpose. I know how proud you must feel to have a grandson like him. He will depend on your guidance and good nurturing to help him fulfill that purpose
Good use of rhymes couplets and enjambment
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for this empathetic review and such lovely supportive comments, but you right about the nurturing and loving guidance, which all children deserve, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Razz
So very beautiful.
So glorious.
So victorious.
A wonderful testimony.
Another miracle from our loving Father.
Beautiful child!!
So full of love and emotions.
Wonderful little story in fantastic poem.
Razz
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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So very beautiful.
So glorious.
So victorious.
A wonderful testimony.
Another miracle from our loving Father.
Beautiful child!!
So full of love and emotions.
Wonderful little story in fantastic poem.
Razz
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you Razz, I humbly thank you for such a supportive confirmation, positive comments and review, blessings to you. Roy.
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You are most welcome, my good friend.
Have a restful evening.
Razz
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You too Razz.
Comment from jmdg1954
Thank you, Roy, for sharing the entire posting with us. Your poem is genuinely written from the heart. Your pride shows through the words.
Your notes close the poem and gives it further warmth and love.
Nicely composed and was glad to have been a small part. John
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Roy, for sharing the entire posting with us. Your poem is genuinely written from the heart. Your pride shows through the words.
Your notes close the poem and gives it further warmth and love.
Nicely composed and was glad to have been a small part. John
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you John for this most beautiful review and excellent comments, blessings my friend, Roy.
Comment from kiwijenny
Roy your love for this boy shines through...I am so convinced God loves the children..Mathew 18:10
"See that you do not despise one of these little ones. For I tell you that in heaven their angels always see the face of my Father who is in heaven.
God is soooo good
God bless
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Roy your love for this boy shines through...I am so convinced God loves the children..Mathew 18:10
"See that you do not despise one of these little ones. For I tell you that in heaven their angels always see the face of my Father who is in heaven.
God is soooo good
God bless
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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You are absolutely correct, Jenny, such lovely gifts, they are the true treasures of God, great review, thank you my friend, blessings, Roy.
Comment from DR DIP
This is wonderful write Roy. congratulations...perfect AABB rhyme.
Good luck in the poetry competition as well Roy
That certainly is a novel you have written in your author's notes Roy, I must say. lol
respect, dip
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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This is wonderful write Roy. congratulations...perfect AABB rhyme.
Good luck in the poetry competition as well Roy
That certainly is a novel you have written in your author's notes Roy, I must say. lol
respect, dip
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thanks Dip, for these lovely words and great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
What a beautiful dedication, Roy. What a blessing this grandson is to you and the entire family, and what a tribute to God's great goodness.
Love, love, love this sentiment: 'no thought conceived can thwart God's claim.' What an insight! Absolutely brilliant. Thank you for making my day.
Anthony (wish I had a six to give you)
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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What a beautiful dedication, Roy. What a blessing this grandson is to you and the entire family, and what a tribute to God's great goodness.
Love, love, love this sentiment: 'no thought conceived can thwart God's claim.' What an insight! Absolutely brilliant. Thank you for making my day.
Anthony (wish I had a six to give you)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you Antony your support and generous words, they really are God's gift, blessings, Roy.
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Comment from rjuselius
this is a little gem in the ocean of poetry! the topic is fabulous and it becomes clear how much you love the boy and how he is such a gifted child.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest! this should be a strong contender! virtual six..
rebekka x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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this is a little gem in the ocean of poetry! the topic is fabulous and it becomes clear how much you love the boy and how he is such a gifted child.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest! this should be a strong contender! virtual six..
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you Rebekka, lovely support, and generous remarks and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Thanks for sharing "Eternal sparks."
I Love the story you have told that takes us in a natural progression through your grandson's spark of life and near death. I Like the touch of the changing Joys as the stages of life change. I like the logical flow that brings us to the line: you're sealed in Christ, His chosen seed.
May God continue to inspire and Bless you.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thanks for sharing "Eternal sparks."
I Love the story you have told that takes us in a natural progression through your grandson's spark of life and near death. I Like the touch of the changing Joys as the stages of life change. I like the logical flow that brings us to the line: you're sealed in Christ, His chosen seed.
May God continue to inspire and Bless you.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you for this outstanding review, remarks, and great stars, blessings, Roy.
You are very welcome, Embrace the Love from above!
