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Steve's Story-Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Country Justice"
A collection of my poems

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Comment from Denise S
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This was really humorous and it flowed quite well . I really enjoyed reading it. I wish you all the best in the contest too.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thanks, Denise. Glad you enjoyed this light-hearted piece.
    Steve
Comment from c_lucas
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That could put a kink in the fulfillment of justice. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very easy read.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thanks, Charles.
    Steve
reply by c_lucas on 23-Sep-2011
    You're welcome, Steve
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi kiwis,

This is so funny and I had no idea Roberta was Rob. What a vivid imagination you possess! You have penned a lyrical rhyme in these quatrains and the meter flows easily down the page. Love the theme and the last quatrain...I am still laughing. Well done and good luck in the contest....chey

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thanks for your kind words - I had fun writing this and thought it would do well in the contest, but no such luck...
    I always appreciate hearing that one of my pieces has raised a laugh.
    Steve
Comment from Linda England Bonam
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OMG... I am still laughing over this one! This was hilarious!
I loved the flow and rhythm and rhyme of this poem. It was truly a great read!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thanks for your kind words - I had fun writing this and thought it would do well in the contest, but no such luck...
    I always appreciate hearing that one of my pieces has raised a laugh.
    Steve
Comment from Joan E.
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I enjoyed your tale with its rhymes and innuendo and the final, surprising twist. Your caricature picture-choice is perfect too. Best wishes in the contest with this very creative entry. -Joan

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thanks for your kind words - I had fun writing this and thought it would do well in the contest, but no such luck...
    I always appreciate hearing that one of my pieces has raised a laugh.
    Steve
reply by Joan E. on 23-Sep-2011
    I don't think about winning contests (I only enter the not blind ones, just as I only read books with authors names on them!) on the assumption that more folks will read my work, and I will improve my writing as a result of learning from their reviews. I still think you work will do very well in the contest and I found it hilarious. -Joan
Comment from Bellydanser
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LOL Great use of the long/short/long/short sentence lengths to give cadence to the rhyming lines. Great meter throughout and the story was very humorous. This should definitely be a contender. :)

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thanks for your kind words - I had fun writing this and thought it would do well in the contest, but no such luck...
    I always appreciate hearing that one of my pieces has raised a laugh.
    Steve
Comment from RYME4U
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Wow, Very funny. The rhyme and the rhythm are both good. The story is hilarious! This is well written and very well illustrated and the punchline is hysterical!Greaty job!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thanks for your kind words - I had fun writing this and thought it would do well in the contest, but no such luck...
    I always appreciate hearing that one of my pieces has raised a laugh.
    Steve
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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ha ha -- most impressive..
so cleverly thoughtout..
- the content, the flow
to the words, and to both
rhythm and rhyme, all
excellent....

a great fun read..
it's deserving of a six.. but I've none left... sigh.

I can wish you the best of luck with the contest, though,
Steve... has to be a winner.

Margaret

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thank you for the kind words and the virtual six.
    I thought this had a good chance in the contest, but it is languishing with the also-rans...
    Steve
Comment from TammyGail
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LMAO... Whew that sight may indeed be better than a cold shower this was great. Your imagery pulls the reader in and your words keep one seated. And what a funny surprise ending.. It was a pleasure thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thanks for your kind words - I had fun writing this and thought it would do well in the contest, but no such luck...
    I always appreciate hearing that one of my pieces has raised a laugh.
    Steve
Comment from gsuarez
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A truly excellent piece that still has me grinning. The rhyme and meter were very much on point and drove the poem musically. The surprise ending gave the poem the right touch.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011
    Thank you for the kind review - glad you enjoyed this light-hearted piece.
    Steve