Cocoon
Repose and Renewal115 total reviews
Comment from Wild Flower
Hi Amada. This is lovely and I think we all know that feeling of wanting the hide from the world for just a bit. I like this style of poem as well. Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Hi Amada. This is lovely and I think we all know that feeling of wanting the hide from the world for just a bit. I like this style of poem as well. Great job!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you for reading and reviewing dear friend.
Comment from Colin Douglas
Excellent. Beautiful words that flow from start to finish. The first line prepares the way for the last line. Very good.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Excellent. Beautiful words that flow from start to finish. The first line prepares the way for the last line. Very good.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you Colin for this very inspiring review.
Comment from Aussie
I liked your poem which is true of all of us at one stage or another; Ivory tower one day and out there and part of the masses the next day. I think we all need that time out to take stock and renew our thoughts. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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I liked your poem which is true of all of us at one stage or another; Ivory tower one day and out there and part of the masses the next day. I think we all need that time out to take stock and renew our thoughts. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you for commenting in the cocoon effect. Your comments are so well accepted.
Comment from LYLE
Amanda,
If I were to have four children and four grandchildren,
I know that I would stay in my cocoon for a while. It is wonderful to have the children and grandchildren, but I agree, there is a time for all things. It is now 2:18am, I am off to my cocoon:)
Fondly, Lyle
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Amanda,
If I were to have four children and four grandchildren,
I know that I would stay in my cocoon for a while. It is wonderful to have the children and grandchildren, but I agree, there is a time for all things. It is now 2:18am, I am off to my cocoon:)
Fondly, Lyle
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you for getting out of your cocoon and review my work, loyal friend!
Comment from warbler
This poem has a lovely presentation. The long length and short lines make the shape of a cocoon. Very clever. I enjoyed the message. The short lines gave the poem a nice rhythm.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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This poem has a lovely presentation. The long length and short lines make the shape of a cocoon. Very clever. I enjoyed the message. The short lines gave the poem a nice rhythm.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you for reading and commenting this work.
Comment from jason456
I can really relate to your poem because I do this so often. I think everyone needs time to withdraw and be in their own little world and recharge. Written very well, and very descriptive. Good job!
Patti :)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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I can really relate to your poem because I do this so often. I think everyone needs time to withdraw and be in their own little world and recharge. Written very well, and very descriptive. Good job!
Patti :)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you Patti for reading and reviewing this work.
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Amada,
It was my pleasure.
Patti :)
Comment from AnnaLinda
You have expressed your thoughts in this poem in an interesting way. I think that I feel that way too often:)
I liked the idea of the inner clock and these lines:
"Closed
from wantings
and needs"
Linda
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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You have expressed your thoughts in this poem in an interesting way. I think that I feel that way too often:)
I liked the idea of the inner clock and these lines:
"Closed
from wantings
and needs"
Linda
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you for quoting your faves, dear reviewer of my work.
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You are welcome amada.
Comment from foxtale
So I will stay in for a while
Nice line.
I like how you quietly share
Also some great imagery, such as inner clock.
And In a cocoon.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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So I will stay in for a while
Nice line.
I like how you quietly share
Also some great imagery, such as inner clock.
And In a cocoon.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Thank you foxtale for reading and reviewing this work.
Comment from kukarad70
Dear Amada, your thought to wrap yourself inside the cocoon in self improvement poem, Cocoon, really to bring heat for your hidden talent outside. Cocoon provides the warm courtesy to warm out your feelings and thoughts outside to be explored. "a slow motion
old mechanical
reel" as our mind has stored the thing like this and all are coming out turn by turn if we become eagerous and labourious. Our inner clock to make activate surely we must keep us heated means active. So that you have shown the way to squeeze out our quality or potentials throughout the source Cocoon implied. So nice poem to read written in free verse format.
Thanks and regards,
Kamal
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Dear Amada, your thought to wrap yourself inside the cocoon in self improvement poem, Cocoon, really to bring heat for your hidden talent outside. Cocoon provides the warm courtesy to warm out your feelings and thoughts outside to be explored. "a slow motion
old mechanical
reel" as our mind has stored the thing like this and all are coming out turn by turn if we become eagerous and labourious. Our inner clock to make activate surely we must keep us heated means active. So that you have shown the way to squeeze out our quality or potentials throughout the source Cocoon implied. So nice poem to read written in free verse format.
Thanks and regards,
Kamal
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Hi Kamal. What an inspiring review to my poem. I had no idea of the meaning behind my simple words. I learned something so valuable today!
Comment from joelh605
:) Lovely imagery, as always.
"the complex simplicity of my inner clock" is good; it borders on the self-conscious, but still good.
Do come back out and write more!
Smiles,
Joel
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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:) Lovely imagery, as always.
"the complex simplicity of my inner clock" is good; it borders on the self-conscious, but still good.
Do come back out and write more!
Smiles,
Joel
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Hi Joel. Thank you!
