A Magical Meeting
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Comment from Boogienights
How mystical an experience was that, kind of like a dream.I love this rhyming poem, so well written with its descriptive words that make in come to life. What would you do if you met again? Thanks for sharing this mystery with us.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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How mystical an experience was that, kind of like a dream.I love this rhyming poem, so well written with its descriptive words that make in come to life. What would you do if you met again? Thanks for sharing this mystery with us.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I don't know what I'd do. Maybe try to ask questions. It's nice to think about.
I very much appreciate this lovely review.
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely one, Yvonne. I imagine something like Pan, a satyr with his flute in hand. Smooth and steady meter with great rhyming and internal rhymes in every third line. Beautiful!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Lovely one, Yvonne. I imagine something like Pan, a satyr with his flute in hand. Smooth and steady meter with great rhyming and internal rhymes in every third line. Beautiful!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you. You know how much this means to me.
Comment from Nika2016
I like it...reminding me of a leprechaun...and this form is like a song moving along in rhyme...beautifully written and presented in the colors of the Irish...:)
Very nice.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I like it...reminding me of a leprechaun...and this form is like a song moving along in rhyme...beautifully written and presented in the colors of the Irish...:)
Very nice.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you for compliment 'like a song.' I appreciate your lovely comments, and review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
So very well done. Perfect in rhyme and meter and such a fun story. I do love it when a poem has meaning to me and I understand it. So many I do not. I guess the writer knows, but I do wonder if anyone else does. I skip those. =} Very well done.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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So very well done. Perfect in rhyme and meter and such a fun story. I do love it when a poem has meaning to me and I understand it. So many I do not. I guess the writer knows, but I do wonder if anyone else does. I skip those. =} Very well done.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I'm so glad to see someone else that doesn't always understand. Thank you for the awesome review. Such lovely comments are greatly appreciated.
Comment from karenina
I adored this work....the photo, the background color, the bold font, the spacing....each of these serve to frame a word painting so real and comforting to read I read it again and agAin!
Karenina
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I adored this work....the photo, the background color, the bold font, the spacing....each of these serve to frame a word painting so real and comforting to read I read it again and agAin!
Karenina
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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That makes me feel so good that you read it over and over. Thank you for telling me that.
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I do n' t do that often.....
Karenina
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That makes it more special. Thank you.
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Th a no YOURSELF! You made some great artistic choices!
Karenina
Comment from meeshu
I love triquatrain form and you use it beautifully. your writing has such great pace and urgency. simple yet mystical--billowy yet rational. so much fun to read. you have a gift.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I love triquatrain form and you use it beautifully. your writing has such great pace and urgency. simple yet mystical--billowy yet rational. so much fun to read. you have a gift.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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What a lovely compliment. Thank you so much for this wonderful review.
Comment from Wetbelly01
What a beautiful piece!
It has a smooth rhythm and rhyme...
With no pesky 'glitches'...
My compliments on this fine poem!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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What a beautiful piece!
It has a smooth rhythm and rhyme...
With no pesky 'glitches'...
My compliments on this fine poem!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much! That means a lot to me.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Yvonne;
Such a lovely poem you've penned. I don't think I've ever seen this poetic form, but it is a great combination of rhyme and rhythm. Well done, and thank you for a lovely way to start my Sunday.
patty
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hi, Yvonne;
Such a lovely poem you've penned. I don't think I've ever seen this poetic form, but it is a great combination of rhyme and rhythm. Well done, and thank you for a lovely way to start my Sunday.
patty
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the great review. I'm glad I could give a pleasant start to your day.