Tell me where you'll be?
A love song.87 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Tell me where you'll be,indeed these are very beautiful and inspirational song phrases,enjoyed reading them,God bless you, Lakeport.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Tell me where you'll be,indeed these are very beautiful and inspirational song phrases,enjoyed reading them,God bless you, Lakeport.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, for you gracious comments and review, blessings, Roy.
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your welcom.lakeport.
Comment from jim lawler
Very nicely put and it has good rhythm I didn't see any typos; It puts forth a comforting message and you are in sync with your rhyming. Good luck with it. Jim
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Very nicely put and it has good rhythm I didn't see any typos; It puts forth a comforting message and you are in sync with your rhyming. Good luck with it. Jim
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thanks Jim for dropping by and giving this a great rating, I appreciate it. Blessings, Roy,
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. This could be used in church.
IF I COULD PAINT A PORTRAIL, IF I COULD HELP TO SEE ...
MY FATHER'S VIEW FROM HEAVEN, HIS GRACE AND LOVE THAT'S FREE;
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Excellent poem. This could be used in church.
IF I COULD PAINT A PORTRAIL, IF I COULD HELP TO SEE ...
MY FATHER'S VIEW FROM HEAVEN, HIS GRACE AND LOVE THAT'S FREE;
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for this gracious review and comments, blessings, Roy.
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THANK YOU!
Comment from emrpoems
I love the theme in this piece
Do you know where you will be when the trumpet calls?
Do You?? A thought provoking poem and I hope that it will cause the readers to do some introspection.
thanks for the notes and references. Love the picture
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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I love the theme in this piece
Do you know where you will be when the trumpet calls?
Do You?? A thought provoking poem and I hope that it will cause the readers to do some introspection.
thanks for the notes and references. Love the picture
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Roy: What a grand song to honor the Lord Jesus and to use for a witness song! I like the beat and the message.
My mom-in-laws sister had a doctorate in education from Guasteves in Minnesota, she dedicated her life to teaching music and art. Her family started a foundation for scholarships for students. Edna Erickson was so kind.
I like the if you can, I pray that we will see Jesus and have a scribe's table in Heaven.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Roy: What a grand song to honor the Lord Jesus and to use for a witness song! I like the beat and the message.
My mom-in-laws sister had a doctorate in education from Guasteves in Minnesota, she dedicated her life to teaching music and art. Her family started a foundation for scholarships for students. Edna Erickson was so kind.
I like the if you can, I pray that we will see Jesus and have a scribe's table in Heaven.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for these kind, generous and encouraging comments, stars and review, I appreciate them so much, blessings, Roy.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Tell me where you'll be?' is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. With God's grace I'll be waiting to see His loving face. It was a privilege to review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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'Tell me where you'll be?' is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. With God's grace I'll be waiting to see His loving face. It was a privilege to review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you Duchess, for your this inspiring review, and expansive comments and stars, blessings, Roy.
Roy, your more than welcome and definitely deserved the stars.
Blessings, the Duchess
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Really good lyric, Roy, and I like the chorus "tell me where you'll be..." It's very catchy. I made up a tune and sang it, since I can't know the tune you have in your mind.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Really good lyric, Roy, and I like the chorus "tell me where you'll be..." It's very catchy. I made up a tune and sang it, since I can't know the tune you have in your mind.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you Phyllis for the great review, and review, I wrote it so long ago I'm not i can! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Ben Colder
Wish He would come today and snatch us out of here. Getting a little homesick.However, I know there are many yet who needs you and others to show the way. He lives, dear Bro, He lives+
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Wish He would come today and snatch us out of here. Getting a little homesick.However, I know there are many yet who needs you and others to show the way. He lives, dear Bro, He lives+
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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You and I both, but I'm needed here for the moment, and so are you, dear friend and brother! Thanks for being a friend Ben, blessings Roy.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Roy.
This is such a great write. I believe in God but, not so much in Christianity. I think it's near impossible to be a Christian as there are so many issues that come up with being human however, this piece reminds me sincerely that to receive true love of God is to be sincere in our belief that He IS alive and well and all we have to do is ask for forgiveness to receive...xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Hi Roy.
This is such a great write. I believe in God but, not so much in Christianity. I think it's near impossible to be a Christian as there are so many issues that come up with being human however, this piece reminds me sincerely that to receive true love of God is to be sincere in our belief that He IS alive and well and all we have to do is ask for forgiveness to receive...xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much for the great review, Christians believe that we are hidden in the death and resurrection of Christ, The expression ,"not perfect, forgiven" blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dean Kuch
This was a beautifully written spiritual hymn, Roy. Great tempo, with a powerful message that asks that all important question. When Christ returns, on which side of the line would He find us standing, the worlds, or His.
Has this been set to music yet? If not, it certainly should be.
Great work!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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This was a beautifully written spiritual hymn, Roy. Great tempo, with a powerful message that asks that all important question. When Christ returns, on which side of the line would He find us standing, the worlds, or His.
Has this been set to music yet? If not, it certainly should be.
Great work!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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A long time ago Dean, but I thought it would make a good poem, thanks for the great review my friend, blessings, Roy.
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You're very welcome, Roy. :}
