Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "haiku (jaguar)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
33 total reviews
Comment from ProSongwriter
Okay, Robyn ... quit pussyfooting around and being catty!
Love the picture ... looks a little like Di when she's PO'd with me - pretty but dangerous. But women are always dangerous. I'm completely and totally fearless and she scares the heck out of me.
Loved the poem ... you always write the best poems.
Love & hugs,
Alan
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Okay, Robyn ... quit pussyfooting around and being catty!
Love the picture ... looks a little like Di when she's PO'd with me - pretty but dangerous. But women are always dangerous. I'm completely and totally fearless and she scares the heck out of me.
Loved the poem ... you always write the best poems.
Love & hugs,
Alan
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks, pal!
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You bet!
Comment from heyjude
Robyn, this is a cute haiku. I can just see this cat burglar. Probably no one would chase him down to catch him .. unless they had a gun to give him setting to sleep
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Robyn, this is a cute haiku. I can just see this cat burglar. Probably no one would chase him down to catch him .. unless they had a gun to give him setting to sleep
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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HAHAH! You're probably right! Thanks!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Very clever with the satori first--I like it that way. I don't know where you are in reviewing because I haven't been able to get to the clubroom, but I just added a haiku on birds. Have a good day, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Very clever with the satori first--I like it that way. I don't know where you are in reviewing because I haven't been able to get to the clubroom, but I just added a haiku on birds. Have a good day, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Hmmm...I think we're already voting on b irds. I'll check to see if I can still get it in. Thanks for telling me!
Comment from royowen
A great way of describing an event with the central character being the leopard, a good satori line, of course very few leopards would have "pursuers". Well framed Robyn, good one, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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A great way of describing an event with the central character being the leopard, a good satori line, of course very few leopards would have "pursuers". Well framed Robyn, good one, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks, Roy!
Comment from danpald
Great home protection system
Better than a dog that cannot climb
For the robbers can not get away
Unless they give another morsel for fun
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Great home protection system
Better than a dog that cannot climb
For the robbers can not get away
Unless they give another morsel for fun
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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haha! Thanks, Dan!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Robyn, this a great haiku for the challenge. I like the satori line a lot which starts off your haiku. A magnificent animal, the jaguar. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Hi Robyn, this a great haiku for the challenge. I like the satori line a lot which starts off your haiku. A magnificent animal, the jaguar. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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So true, Ulla! Thanks
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You paint a great picture of the speed and agility of the jaguar. I like their cars too. The cats are amazing. I have a Savanah. They look like miniature Jaguars and jet around the house like lightening.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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You paint a great picture of the speed and agility of the jaguar. I like their cars too. The cats are amazing. I have a Savanah. They look like miniature Jaguars and jet around the house like lightening.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Hahaha! Sounds interesting!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good haiku Robyn,
what I see is the swift jaguar waiting for the cat burglar then snatches the burglar and takes off like a speeding bullet??
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Good haiku Robyn,
what I see is the swift jaguar waiting for the cat burglar then snatches the burglar and takes off like a speeding bullet??
Gert
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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THANK YOU!
Comment from aryr
Wow, so direct and in so few words. It was simple and direct and so very enjoyable. The picture set the pace of anticipation and fear very well. Very enjoyable, thanks.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Wow, so direct and in so few words. It was simple and direct and so very enjoyable. The picture set the pace of anticipation and fear very well. Very enjoyable, thanks.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks!!
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welcome Robyn.
Comment from giraffmang
Very nice robyn,
I like the double meanings you've employed here. Very witty and very clever. The inversion works well here too with the 'traditional' satori line leading in.
All the best
G
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Very nice robyn,
I like the double meanings you've employed here. Very witty and very clever. The inversion works well here too with the 'traditional' satori line leading in.
All the best
G
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks, my friend!
