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BLAZE: Angel from Hell

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Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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Thanks for the pleasure of another fine chapter with Blaze at the reins. Ginger was always able to keep things in a uproar with conflicts-a-plenty, but I'm not sure that Blaze won't surpass her before this is over. Great chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Ric. Blaze has a surprise coming fairly soon that will knock her off her path. :)
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Phyllis,

I know I keep repeating the same thing about what a great author you are, but it's true. This chapter is really good too. I hope the girls have fun on their night out. It would be nice if Blaze could stop being a demon.

Kat

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thank you so much, Kat. Soon something will happen that will turn Blaze around. :)
Comment from elgone
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Blaze and Lorna clubbing with a wad a cash, courtesy of Luke.Lorna is already half lit from guzzling wine. No, nothing could possibly go wrong in that scenario - nothing at all.

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 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    LOL! Nope. LOL! I love your review. THanks! :)
Comment from juliesibs
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Nice story line, it flows smooth with no stutters to be noted. The characters, as always, are awesome and the dialog is believable. Very nice job on this one.

Thanks for the great read,
Julie

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thank you, Julie. Did you read it?
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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She is little Miss Fix-it! LOL She did a good job of softening the blow for Lorna. Now maybe Lorna can find a nice guy but I'm not sure a crooked Lawyer deserves a nice guy. No, she doesn't so maybe she can hook-up with another crooked Lawyer and live unhappy ever after. LOL Good job Phyllis. :<) Nancy

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    LOL! Thanks, Nancy, but maybe she just needs someone not corrupt for a change, someone to turn her around. I don't know what will happen. She's not a major character. It's up in the air now. :)
reply by nancy_e_davis on 06-Feb-2015
    Being a Lawyer she can handle it! LOL
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Hi Phyllis,

I like the line about love impairing the brain, lol. Blaze did a good job and I'm wondering if Luke gives out plaques for Demon of the Year.

It's better for Lorna to know the truth and be angry, not sad. Now that she can enjoy a little nooky, she'll find another guy. However, she doesn't have a clean record and I don't think she deserves a really nice guy. At least not now. Maybe she'll change her ways, but she IS a lawyer after all.

Hugs,
Lou

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Lou. Yes, and a tough, no nonsense lawyer at that. Maybe she needs to get away from corrupt Senator Blake and she may change her ways. Or not. You can't predict what people will do. :)
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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That was the best thing Blaze could do -- tell Lorna about Seb cheating on her, which will give the girl reason to look ahead and move on - and to go out on the town will cheer them both up.

as always, an enjoyable read, Phyllis.

Margaret

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Margaret. Now hurry up and post part two of The Laurels so we can see more of Rose and Scott "at home" together. Sigh... so romantic. :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I loved the authors notes...In case you don't recall...LOL

I am glad that Lorna can see that Blaze is only thinking of her.
well, sort of, Blaze wanted him too, if she couldn't have him now and again, Lorna wasn't going to either. They are all looking out for themselves anyway, so Lorna with get over it. Now they are going out on the binge that will be a laugh! Now 6s again, you get them at the beginning of the week! :>) xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Sandra. Yes, they are being selfish, but Blaze thinks Sebastian deserved his punishment. He didn't, but she is rationalizing that it was "justice" but it was only anger and jealousy. SHe'll realize that one day and bring him back to face charges. :)
reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 06-Feb-2015
    That's good! So long as he is still punished. Too many politicians get away with murder, literally! :) x
Comment from Alan K Pease
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It strikes me that your characters are "religious' even though some may work for the devil and are evil. Blaze covers her bets.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thanks, Alan. I see "religious" is in quotes. How exactly do you mean that? Would you mind adding a brief explanation? :)
reply by Alan K Pease on 06-Feb-2015
    I am not sure I can - treated or regarded with a devotion and scrupulousness appropriate to worship - whether the devil or not
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Okay, got it. Makes sense. Thanks.
Comment from Misrael
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Well it looks like they are still friends at least for now but we will see what happens in the future. It seems like Blaze just wants to use people for her own advancement but maybe no, time will tell how things turn out for her,Lorna and Tara. Good read and keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thank you so much. :)