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Cold

Warm hearts turn cold

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Comment from smileycloud
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a very nice 5 7 5
the content actually tells a story
even though such a short piece in which to tell it
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thank you for you review.
Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading your moon contest entry. You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose an appropriate photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your review.
reply by marybell1 on 22-Aug-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello author
what a great entry for this prompt contest
you words go perfect with amazing vivid picture
Best to you

Gert

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017


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    Thank you for your review.
reply by Gert sherwood on 19-Aug-2017
    You are welcome
    Gert
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Poet,

This is a cool and very relative poem -- perfect timing with the eclipse so near! *smile* This poem perfectly describes the moment of the darkening - when the skies grow black and the warmth of the sun is gone for a bit. Nice job! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017


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    Thank you for your review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Wow! This one is short sweet and to the point. It is in perfect format and the message is crystal clear to this reader. That last line was the hard punch. "Turns warm hearts cold" Yikes ... great write good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your review. I tried to get a tone, I wanted to leave the reader cold, because that is how I feel when the sun disappears.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the moon and the eclipse of the sun this coming week. It is a natural wonder and it does not happen often. We should enjoy this wonder that many of us will not see again.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017


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    Thank you for your review.
Comment from nbonner
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Nice. Reading this puts me right there as the sun sets and the moon rises. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017


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    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Cold, has the right set up and comes in advance of the expected eclipse. The extension to our own shadowed empathy is an interesting connection that needs to be explored further.

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017


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    Thank your for your review.