Tales Of A Leaf
True nature of a leaf in relation to mankind21 total reviews
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Totally awesome writing! Great from beginning to end. Kept my attention and interest, which is hard to do normally. Great story about this leaf! Loved it. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
Totally awesome writing! Great from beginning to end. Kept my attention and interest, which is hard to do normally. Great story about this leaf! Loved it. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you Susanne I appreciate
Comment from sage17611
This is a cute poem about the life and journey of a leaf, very imaginative, and fun to read. Your poem offers a different perspective about leaves, which could be related to our life's journey. The poem has a nice flow, nice to read, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
This is a cute poem about the life and journey of a leaf, very imaginative, and fun to read. Your poem offers a different perspective about leaves, which could be related to our life's journey. The poem has a nice flow, nice to read, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you so much I cherish your review
Comment from Lisa Deverick
I like the originality of your poem content. I would suggest to stay in the present or in the past- the first stanza flips from present to past to present, making it a bit confusing to the reader. I really do like the last part that reads like a Dr Seuss poem "for all leaves are leaves and all trees are trees" It reads with optimism.
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reply by the author on 05-May-2016
I like the originality of your poem content. I would suggest to stay in the present or in the past- the first stanza flips from present to past to present, making it a bit confusing to the reader. I really do like the last part that reads like a Dr Seuss poem "for all leaves are leaves and all trees are trees" It reads with optimism.
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Comment Written 05-May-2016
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Thank you
Comment from TAB_that's me
I like this! Very different but neat. To me it is saying we are all the same no matter what 'tree' we came from. A unique way to look at being unique and yet all created equal.
Teresa
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
I like this! Very different but neat. To me it is saying we are all the same no matter what 'tree' we came from. A unique way to look at being unique and yet all created equal.
Teresa
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate your unique meaning to the poem.
Comment from tony bronk
This is my very first leaf poem! I am thrilled! I really did enjoy it. It is unique and very interesting to follow the life of a leaf. Excellent write! Tony Bronk self-righteous poet
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
This is my very first leaf poem! I am thrilled! I really did enjoy it. It is unique and very interesting to follow the life of a leaf. Excellent write! Tony Bronk self-righteous poet
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you Tony I appreciate
Comment from papa55mike
What a great poem. Well written and expressed. Have you tried the Advanced Editor on writing page. It's a lot of fun playing with all the gadgets it has. I wish I had a six for you. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
What a great poem. Well written and expressed. Have you tried the Advanced Editor on writing page. It's a lot of fun playing with all the gadgets it has. I wish I had a six for you. Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you ,I will try it out
Comment from wtwb
Lovely poem. I liked the easy way it brought the image of the falling leaf to my mind.Liked the line " all leaves are leaves/And all trees are trees".
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
Lovely poem. I liked the easy way it brought the image of the falling leaf to my mind.Liked the line " all leaves are leaves/And all trees are trees".
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thanks so much I appreciate
Comment from aryr
This was a fantastic poem. I truly enjoyed reading it. You took that lone leaf on a wonderful journey. It was not one of sorrow but that of an adventure. The picture choice was very appropriate and the background paper color and print color gave it that special touch. Thank you so much.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
This was a fantastic poem. I truly enjoyed reading it. You took that lone leaf on a wonderful journey. It was not one of sorrow but that of an adventure. The picture choice was very appropriate and the background paper color and print color gave it that special touch. Thank you so much.
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thanks so much I appreciate
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you are welcome
Comment from Pantygynt
I loved this and eventually saw beyond the simple magic of a tale well told, to the anti racist message concealed amongst the foliage, where no leaf gives a toss where any other leaf comes from.
At one point a leaf asks:
"where are u going ?"
Later another asks:
"Where are you from?"
In using "u" as well as "you" were you making a statement about languistic difference or simply a typo?
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
I loved this and eventually saw beyond the simple magic of a tale well told, to the anti racist message concealed amongst the foliage, where no leaf gives a toss where any other leaf comes from.
At one point a leaf asks:
"where are u going ?"
Later another asks:
"Where are you from?"
In using "u" as well as "you" were you making a statement about languistic difference or simply a typo?
Comment Written 05-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you, the "u" was a typo. I appreciate you pointing that out
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You are welcome.
Comment from thonnigford09
I loved this the imagery and the artwork and color scheme were beautiful!!! I wish to convey a message as well as you have done here!!! Thanks!!! thonnigford09.
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
I loved this the imagery and the artwork and color scheme were beautiful!!! I wish to convey a message as well as you have done here!!! Thanks!!! thonnigford09.
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 05-May-2016
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Thank you I appreciate
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