Comment from valerieellis

Excellent

Excellent! I love the imagery you captured in this poem. Your lyrics flowed smoothly and painted a sad, yet lovely picture of lost love. Thank you for sharing. God bless :-)

 Comment Written 10-May-2015

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Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a wonderful song my friend. The repeated line about the mirror having two faces, and the songwriters love that shouldn't be, really touched my heart. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.

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Comment from Janet7053

Excellent

song lyrics meant to burn a particular emotional hook into the reader's psyche. You did that with the repetitive line about the mirror has two faces. Your perfect rhyming pairs make for smooth reading. You have only one proximate rhyme love/enough.

Nicely done.

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Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

A sad but very nicely written posting. You can make up the music as you read. Nice choice of words as well.

An enjoyable read.

Thank you.

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Comment from abbasjoy

Excellent

Well you've gone and done it again, with those Country and Western lyrics about your love being gone.
I liked the repetition reinforcing the message. The lyrics are lilting, and perfectly suited for this type of song.
Good job.

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Comment from Healing

Excellent

Very nice poem.
Well written with a great flow.
Very easy and enjoyable to read for sure.
Great stuff.
Thank you for sharing your talent.

KY

 Comment Written 09-May-2015

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Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

For someone like yourself a lyric writer hooked on refrains, this contest must have come real easy man. As usual I can hear the singing of it in my mind. A great C & W lyric. Good luck in the contest.

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Comment from mommerry

Excellent

As a country music fan, I could almost hear this lament being sung by Charlie Pride. The "story" rings true - the repetition just right for the lyrics. Good job.

 Comment Written 09-May-2015

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Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

This was a most delightful response to the writing prompt. You chose to repeat two lines, and it made it seem like a song. My only suggestion (if you want to be grammatically correct) would be to change "should" to "should've" since that will make the use of "been" work better. (It should have never been makes more sense than "it should never been...")Loved the repeating lines. Excellent idea, and very cleverly executed. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

It always takes two to make love work -- a message that I learned the hard way. Excellent repeating lines for the well written "Repetition" poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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