Earthquake Nepal
A free style verse23 total reviews
Comment from walbc
You are to be commended for writing on this most recent event.
Your poem is well written and conveys the horrific destruction of ancient buildings and homes alike. Well done.
Warm regards,
Wendy.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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You are to be commended for writing on this most recent event.
Your poem is well written and conveys the horrific destruction of ancient buildings and homes alike. Well done.
Warm regards,
Wendy.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from pharp
Very good job in this well written free verse regarding the devastating earthquake in Nepal. This is sad, over 2,000 lives have been lost and the count is still rising.
Thanks for sharing. Pharp
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Very good job in this well written free verse regarding the devastating earthquake in Nepal. This is sad, over 2,000 lives have been lost and the count is still rising.
Thanks for sharing. Pharp
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Ine. You did a great job writing about the earthquake in Nepal. Such a tragedy.
So much dammage and so many lifes are lost... This was a heavy one.
You described the situation very well . My thoughts and prayers are with all those people who survived. Well done!! Fia
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Hi Ine. You did a great job writing about the earthquake in Nepal. Such a tragedy.
So much dammage and so many lifes are lost... This was a heavy one.
You described the situation very well . My thoughts and prayers are with all those people who survived. Well done!! Fia
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for this lovely six again.
Comment from fairy77
Nice:) yes I heard 1,000 dead! Biggest earthquake in awhile. Very perfect pic. You did a lovely job with this one. Well I enjoyed all four pieces. Keep up the great work! beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Nice:) yes I heard 1,000 dead! Biggest earthquake in awhile. Very perfect pic. You did a lovely job with this one. Well I enjoyed all four pieces. Keep up the great work! beth fairy77.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday.
Comment from nelliesellie
I like the picture. I am glad you wrote about the earthquake. The historic sites can never be replaced. People run their lives better when surrounded by the good their ancestors have done. The people can not be replaced. Generations will be fractured. Great work.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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I like the picture. I am glad you wrote about the earthquake. The historic sites can never be replaced. People run their lives better when surrounded by the good their ancestors have done. The people can not be replaced. Generations will be fractured. Great work.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday. Thanks for the lovely six.
Comment from Dean Kuch
7,8 this quake registered on the Richter Scale it was said. Widespread devastation, death and destruction. It's such a terrible tragedy, for everyone involved.
A well written poem you've created to showcase their plight... ~Dean
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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7,8 this quake registered on the Richter Scale it was said. Widespread devastation, death and destruction. It's such a terrible tragedy, for everyone involved.
A well written poem you've created to showcase their plight... ~Dean
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday.
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You too...
Comment from MizKat
Hi Ine,
You did a wonderful job in writing this poem about the terrible earthquake that the Capital of Nepal had. I'm so happy that we, in Minnesota, don't get things like that. Thanks for sharing!
Kat
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Hi Ine,
You did a wonderful job in writing this poem about the terrible earthquake that the Capital of Nepal had. I'm so happy that we, in Minnesota, don't get things like that. Thanks for sharing!
Kat
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday.
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I'm getting tired, but every time I come to FS I have replies and messages to answer and reviews to write. I end up being on here for hours. Whew!
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a sad free verse that acts as a reporting arm. Capturing this tragedy like this helps to remind us, in this fast-paced world, of the human suffering going on around the world.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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This is a sad free verse that acts as a reporting arm. Capturing this tragedy like this helps to remind us, in this fast-paced world, of the human suffering going on around the world.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from TomyKan
A solid piece of writing, but I would have liked you to share some emotions. This is just too factual to rate 5 stars. You say "People too, should be mentioned first" and then don't talk about people. It flows well.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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A solid piece of writing, but I would have liked you to share some emotions. This is just too factual to rate 5 stars. You say "People too, should be mentioned first" and then don't talk about people. It flows well.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from patcelaw
This was a terrible big quake. many of the building there were old and not built to the latest building codes in earthquake prone areas.
other world heritage (sited) did you mean sites here?
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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This was a terrible big quake. many of the building there were old and not built to the latest building codes in earthquake prone areas.
other world heritage (sited) did you mean sites here?
Comment Written 26-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine, Have a great and blessed Sunday.
