Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Could not ask for a better birthday gift from you I am sure you had more fun doing this than the children did. god to see family coming together like this.
Great visuals especially--A yellow liquid trickled down one tanned leg as she bolted

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing it for me, emrpoems. I really appreciate that. :}

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Your family sounds like a lot of fun. Each one has a different voice, especially your practical wife who tries to keep you in line. L0L
yellow liquid trickled down one tanned leg -great visual.
What a great idea for a birthday party.
Does she really call you Uncle Deano?

P.S. Be glad you didn't scare the shit out of anyone. :-)

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

Hah-ha, well, we tried, Shari. Yeah, Selena, my wife's niece, has called me Uncle Deano since she was very small. All of my family and friends call me Deano. I think she started it, LOL.

Thanks so much for the review. :}

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I thought I was the only one who loved to scare kids. The littler the better. I still do it to my kids, but now they react by punching so it isn't as much fun. I used to dress up and chase the kids in my sister's neighborhood. There ain't nothing more refreshing than seeing kids terrified. Great recount and story. Gretchen

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

Hah! Well, good for you, Gretchen. It's good to know I am not alone. Thanks so mcuh for the comments. I sincerely appreciate it.

Comment from JM

Excellent

Dean, what a lovely family, really cool picture. Your story is so "freaking" funny. I can tell your "creativity" proceeds your reputation....your ghoulish imagination is vintage Kuch. I was thoroughly entertained from beginning to end.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

Thanks, JM, I am really glad you liked the story. It's all true too, I'm afraid, LOL.

Thanks again! :}

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

What a fun and clever idea for a party and Uncle Deano was just the guy to fix it up. Your story was engaging from start to finish and the group picture provided nice imagery. Thanks so much for sharing this experience with us. 8-)

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

I drew up the plot and plans, but my wife organized it all and got the ball rolling. She's a real go-getter, that one!

Thanks so much for the thoughtful review. :}

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Well I think you did a good job. You certainly are a scary looking bunch. LOL I don't like being scared. My sister did enough scaring me as it was. LOL Your story was very entertaining with lifelike dialogue. Oh! I'm sorry is Lifelike a bad word? LOL Well done! Nancy

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

Hah, lifelike works just fine, Nancy. Thanks so much for dropping by and leaving your comments on this. I really appreciate it. :}

Comment from rod007

Excellent

A really humorous look at a horror scene. Too bad one of the kids peed in their pants but that's the risk of this ghastly show, mon amie. Well done, Dean.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

Thanks, Rod, and we probably would not have been so hard on her if she hadn't acted all big and bad in the beginning. Don't ever let someone tell my that they are incapable of being scared. I know better, LOL. :}

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Now that is one cool birthday party. Maybe I am weird, but even as a little kid, I only liked haunted houses that scared the shit out of me. A good fright in good fun does no damage. Just bring clean underwear.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

That's right, Ed, and I've always liked them too. They never really scared me because I was wise enough to realize it was all just pretend.

Thanks so much for the thoughtful review, my friend. :}

Comment from Louise Michelle

Exceptional

Hi Dean,

Greatest show unearthed is very clever. Tiny spag: fisrst
LOL, this line cracked me up. "You got red paint on your teeth there, Munchkin," I informed her. "It looks cool, though...like you been gnawing on someone."

This was so much fun to read! I'm still smiling and laughing. I'm sure your kids appreciate having you for a Dad. You're not the common garden variety, hee hee.

Hugs,
Lou

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

Hah, nope, I am far from "garden variety", Lou, LOL. I think they like having me around. We sure have lots of fun together, even if it is a bit warped.

Thanks so much for the exceptional rating and for catching that danged SPAG for me. If I only had a nickle... :}

Comment from faragon

Excellent

Really great job in the telling! And to think that really happened made it even better!! I love all the pictures! Nice building up of suspense!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

Thanks, faragon. I'm really happy to know that you enjoyed it. :}