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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from peggles
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Thank heavens for those willing to help these women I am sure many would go on suffering without them
This is an interesting story and I feel sure more heartache and deception is yet to come
looking forward to more

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2011


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Comment from Readywriter52
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Troy is surprised and upset that Margaret knew where Anna was. It appears that there is a whole set up devoted to protecting women and their children. Troy has warned Anna about what Bobby is doing and told her that his father would represent her in court.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


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Comment from Deejharrington
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I'm so glad that Anna and her son found a secretive shelter. That husband isn't going to give up easily. I hope the father can keep him jail long enough. Very well told. I can't wait until the next chapter.
deb

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


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    Thank you for the kind review.
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    You're very welcome
    deb
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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barbara:

I could see this happening, my friend, as I have ended
up helping people I have known for years through my
H-E-A-R-T ministry, yet didn't know it was them until
much later.

another excellent chapter
thanks for sharing
love,
jan

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


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Comment from denhagan
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This was a very interesting Part Three of Chapter 6 to read about how Margaret, Troy's aunt, brings Anna to Troy's office. He is very glad to see her, and at the end, calls his dad to let him know he has something to tell him.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2011


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    You're welcome. Dennis
Comment from Nanashirley
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Great chapter and I think you are growing the story into a well written and believable tale. I saw no need for editing and wait to read more.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2011


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Comment from quashdog
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Poor woman is viciously victimized and she is appologising for the "inconvenience" she caused? Too many victims of abuse feel that it is their problem to face alone. It always leaves loved ones asking themselves; "Why didn't I see the signs?"

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    Between she kept them hidden from you. Probably out of fear and some embarassement. I appreciate your review and insight.
Comment from kiwisteveh
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More my cup of tea, with the story developing a little faster!
As always your writing is accurate and the strong use of dialogue keeps things moving.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2011


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Comment from susjuly7777
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Hats of to the Author for writing about this. I tell you this grip me in so many ways, that I'am so hooked now.
This book is brilliant and I can't wait to read more. I say to anyone out there get this book now.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2011


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Comment from glpar
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What a great turn of events. I thought she might have been rescued by such a group but to have the Aunt be one of them was a good twist. Well written.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2011


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