I Couldn't See the Moon
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a beautiful poem, my friend. And it is true life goes on even if we can't always see it. Gorgeous picture selection. Have a good evening, Brooke~Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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This is a beautiful poem, my friend. And it is true life goes on even if we can't always see it. Gorgeous picture selection. Have a good evening, Brooke~Debbie
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
MoonWillow's artwork is lovely, but your words paint a beautiful picture, even without the gorgeous artwork, Brooke. Flawless, as usual, and almost musical...(sigh)...
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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MoonWillow's artwork is lovely, but your words paint a beautiful picture, even without the gorgeous artwork, Brooke. Flawless, as usual, and almost musical...(sigh)...
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Dawn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Always a pleasure, Brooke! :)
Comment from Cindy Warren
It's kind of amazing how the world and its creatures know what to do no matter how grey or foggy the day is. We had snow here last week and now the bees are back on the flowers. It's like they knew the warm weather would return.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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It's kind of amazing how the world and its creatures know what to do no matter how grey or foggy the day is. We had snow here last week and now the bees are back on the flowers. It's like they knew the warm weather would return.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Cindy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from daeneam
Yep, you are absolutely right, Brooke. This a poem that encourages one's faith and I love it! It is as if you are telling me, that we can't see God, but as long as we feel love, we know He guides us. Good job! c", mae
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Yep, you are absolutely right, Brooke. This a poem that encourages one's faith and I love it! It is as if you are telling me, that we can't see God, but as long as we feel love, we know He guides us. Good job! c", mae
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Mae, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
That's ok you couldn't see the moon...you knew it was there...the tide will tell you the secret of where it is hiding...love your poem Brooke...and the picture is beautiful...very nicely written...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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That's ok you couldn't see the moon...you knew it was there...the tide will tell you the secret of where it is hiding...love your poem Brooke...and the picture is beautiful...very nicely written...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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you are ALWAYS so welcome...hi to Sawyer...miss him...luff
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Yes, the picture is stunning. It and your poem makes one stop and realise what a phenomenal world we live in. Your poem is exquisite and such a pleasure to read through, Brooke. Giddy
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Yes, the picture is stunning. It and your poem makes one stop and realise what a phenomenal world we live in. Your poem is exquisite and such a pleasure to read through, Brooke. Giddy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Giddy, thank you so much for your generous and gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from trimple
Hi Brooke
What a wonderful presentation. Your poem sends a message of hope when all appears lost.
Loved 'bank of clouds' and 'old luna's pull. Forgive for saying this but shouldn't it be lunas' pull? Or am I just thick lol
Beautiful as ever Brooke
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke
What a wonderful presentation. Your poem sends a message of hope when all appears lost.
Loved 'bank of clouds' and 'old luna's pull. Forgive for saying this but shouldn't it be lunas' pull? Or am I just thick lol
Beautiful as ever Brooke
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, Tracy - Luna's is singular possessive - lunas' is plural possessive, but there is only one moon :-) Brooke
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Silly me, of course pfft.
Bit late here, I will blame old luna :)
tracey
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LOL :-) I say you need five minutes in time out ;-)
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:)
Comment from Trybuck
I liked the whole kit-n-caboodle but especially liked the closing stanza.
A little strange to see one without Sawyer's shining face..
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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I liked the whole kit-n-caboodle but especially liked the closing stanza.
A little strange to see one without Sawyer's shining face..
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, Buck - I gave Sawyer a little time off. LOL I appreciate your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
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I reckon he needed the break :)
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He spent the past couple of weeks working very hard at becoming potty trained, and today he celebrated one week of NO accidents, so he deserved the time off LOL :-)
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Hip Hip Hooray!
Another one
Learns the way
Comment from Deniz22
Nice...similar thoughts have been expressed concerning God's love and presence in the lives of believers...which you probably know. Your writing express it better than many others. Dennis (PS: I don't mean to suggest plagiarism in any way. As I reread this I could see how that thought might be conveyed. :)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Nice...similar thoughts have been expressed concerning God's love and presence in the lives of believers...which you probably know. Your writing express it better than many others. Dennis (PS: I don't mean to suggest plagiarism in any way. As I reread this I could see how that thought might be conveyed. :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Dennis. I did not think you were saying that :-) Brooke
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:)
Comment from madhatter1977
Hi Brooke. This is really great writing again. The moon is meant to influence not just the tides on sea or ocean but people as well. We are made up of approximately 70% water I've been told. Great writing and optimistic. Best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke. This is really great writing again. The moon is meant to influence not just the tides on sea or ocean but people as well. We are made up of approximately 70% water I've been told. Great writing and optimistic. Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Pete, thanks so much :-) Brooke
