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haiku (snow no longer falls)

haiku

6 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Excellent
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A very well-written haiku. It seems the weather patterns have changed dramatically over the past few years. Flood waters instead if snow, it will freeze anyway. We had on going thunderstorms for six hours last week, as soon as it seems to be over another one starts.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from RodG
Excellent
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You must be describing Boston or one of towns on the Cape after that recent "bomb cyclone." In only 17 syllables you have described this shocking event vividly. I hope you weren't inundated. Rod

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your review. Yes, the news from Boston led to this poem.

    Do not worry, I am in no danger.
Comment from writerjen
Good
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We're having the same phenomena here in the DC area. Lots of frozen pipes, broken pipes...what a mess. You followed the 5-7-5 haiku requirements. Wondering if a picture would have been an added addition to your poem.. it lacked a bit of flare that a picture could give it without over powering the words you wrote.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your review and suggestion.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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This can be treacherous underfoot and on roads and cause many people to fall on the slippery surface and cars to crash, your summed it up in a few words, magical, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Excellent
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This is a good haiku used to describe the recent events in nature.
Well written, well said.
Our weather patterns seem to be so far from the norm that it gives us good material for our verses.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sharon

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your review. Yes, our weather patterns are far from the norm.
Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a very good and vivid with words poem you have penned. The six stars is because I can picture this scene in my mind as I read it. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your review.