Christmas
A Christmas story in a poem.6 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful Christmas poem and yes sometimes love and faith are the best presents of all, and you most definitely have my smile upon reading this beautiful poem, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
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What a wonderful Christmas poem and yes sometimes love and faith are the best presents of all, and you most definitely have my smile upon reading this beautiful poem, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Thank you. I do have love and I like to share it. :)
Comment from patcelaw
Very nice Christmas poem about how things are when we are living alone with our families far away and there are no children to watch as they open the gifts for them. I identify with the message of this poem as I have been alone about 15 years of the last 22 years. I do not have a problem being alone. Patricia
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Very nice Christmas poem about how things are when we are living alone with our families far away and there are no children to watch as they open the gifts for them. I identify with the message of this poem as I have been alone about 15 years of the last 22 years. I do not have a problem being alone. Patricia
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Thank you Patricia. If one has love in their heart one is never alone.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Christmas poem. The best gift for Christmas is a peaceful time with loved ones around. The physical gifts is only a minor gesture of appreciation given with a pure heart.
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A very well-written Christmas poem. The best gift for Christmas is a peaceful time with loved ones around. The physical gifts is only a minor gesture of appreciation given with a pure heart.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Thank you Sandra. May you have a beautiful Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A true Christmas write with all the seasonal joy contained within it, the treasures of smiling hearts and and loving songs, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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A true Christmas write with all the seasonal joy contained within it, the treasures of smiling hearts and and loving songs, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Thanks Dolly. May you have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Christmas Poem writing prompt.
The picture is lovely and a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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I think this is a good entry for the Christmas Poem writing prompt.
The picture is lovely and a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Thank you Sharon. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
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And to you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
You're absolutely right, poetwatch, and what you've written here in your melancholy yet uplifting entry for the Christmas Poetry Contest couldn't be more true.
The Lord tells us in no uncertain terms that He will never leave us nor forsake us.
He's always true to His word, of course.
I do hope you have good friends and family nearby to share and celebrate Christmas Day with.
I hate to think of anyone--anywhere--spending such a special day alone.
Well done, good rhyming throughout.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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You're absolutely right, poetwatch, and what you've written here in your melancholy yet uplifting entry for the Christmas Poetry Contest couldn't be more true.
The Lord tells us in no uncertain terms that He will never leave us nor forsake us.
He's always true to His word, of course.
I do hope you have good friends and family nearby to share and celebrate Christmas Day with.
I hate to think of anyone--anywhere--spending such a special day alone.
Well done, good rhyming throughout.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Thanks Dean. It's lonely but I have a friend next to me to keep me company and angels never leave me. :) Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
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You're very welcome. :)