Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "CHAPTER CUATRO, PART DOS"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
50 total reviews
Comment from L.M.Mullins
Somehow there is a chapter missing. 6 ends with Miguel asking her for the weekend.
Chapter reads quick and is filed with suspense.
LM
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Somehow there is a chapter missing. 6 ends with Miguel asking her for the weekend.
Chapter reads quick and is filed with suspense.
LM
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from pbroussard209
Ah yes I did miss a chapter, I really love the layers to this story, it keeps me interested and wanting to read more. Your characters are believable and likeable, even the ones that are not so nice. :)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Ah yes I did miss a chapter, I really love the layers to this story, it keeps me interested and wanting to read more. Your characters are believable and likeable, even the ones that are not so nice. :)
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014
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Thank you for dropping by picking up an earlier post. That's sweet.
Comment from Sonaleeka
kick off start.I loved reading this chapter.Amazing writing.Keep amazed us with new chapters.Worth reading .
God bless!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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kick off start.I loved reading this chapter.Amazing writing.Keep amazed us with new chapters.Worth reading .
God bless!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from desire333
I so much have enjoyed reading this. I must catch up with the rest of the chapters to grasp it all. Good luck and look forward to reading more!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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I so much have enjoyed reading this. I must catch up with the rest of the chapters to grasp it all. Good luck and look forward to reading more!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from write hand blue
Hi Barbara, I think it is good idea to start with the last paragraph from the previous chapter.
I missed your previous chapters so I can't comment on the plot.
Your dialogue sounds authentic, with good character descriptions. This looks like an interesting novel.
:) mel.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Hi Barbara, I think it is good idea to start with the last paragraph from the previous chapter.
I missed your previous chapters so I can't comment on the plot.
Your dialogue sounds authentic, with good character descriptions. This looks like an interesting novel.
:) mel.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
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My pleasure...
Comment from Jay Squires
Hey Barbara:
In my opinion (which is proven wrong time and again by my wife) you need to modify,"We have nothing to hide... or to tone down, " We're under siege." >> I just realized that was from the previous post.]
A long silence ensued, before Soni said,[Since she was the one who just spoke, and I don't think there is dialogue from any other women, you can use the personal pronoun here.]
Are there any questions or comments?" [A spacing error. Either a line space if you want a new paragraph, or bring it up to the previous line.]
Once again, a superb chapter. the plot is developing with Jim back and Hughes sniffing around.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Hey Barbara:
In my opinion (which is proven wrong time and again by my wife) you need to modify,"We have nothing to hide... or to tone down, " We're under siege." >> I just realized that was from the previous post.]
A long silence ensued, before Soni said,[Since she was the one who just spoke, and I don't think there is dialogue from any other women, you can use the personal pronoun here.]
Are there any questions or comments?" [A spacing error. Either a line space if you want a new paragraph, or bring it up to the previous line.]
Once again, a superb chapter. the plot is developing with Jim back and Hughes sniffing around.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Barbara - I thought this was well penned and raised some new off shots of the characters in my mind. Great expressive writing - I especially thought your dialogue stood out in this post. It read smooth and kept a steady pace.
Nicley done and good luck back at work...Summer flew by didn't it.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Dear Barbara - I thought this was well penned and raised some new off shots of the characters in my mind. Great expressive writing - I especially thought your dialogue stood out in this post. It read smooth and kept a steady pace.
Nicley done and good luck back at work...Summer flew by didn't it.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Jim's back, no surprise there. The story is heating up. Soni seems like a wonderfully capable woman. Perhaps there will be some romance between Jim and Soni?? I think I'm officially caught up now! Great job of story-telling, Barbara.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Jim's back, no surprise there. The story is heating up. Soni seems like a wonderfully capable woman. Perhaps there will be some romance between Jim and Soni?? I think I'm officially caught up now! Great job of story-telling, Barbara.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from Twilightspire
Great chapter, Barbara. I like how you start us out right in the middle of the action. Jim's returned and apparently in more trouble again.
Excellent work building the mystery of exactly what is going on with him.
The security measures sound fair and legit and I'm interested to see the "what else" Soni was talking about.
Wonderful work, can't wait to read the next chapter.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Great chapter, Barbara. I like how you start us out right in the middle of the action. Jim's returned and apparently in more trouble again.
Excellent work building the mystery of exactly what is going on with him.
The security measures sound fair and legit and I'm interested to see the "what else" Soni was talking about.
Wonderful work, can't wait to read the next chapter.
-T.J.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
Comment from Lynette Marie
I LOVE this story! I've missed some of it, but the mystery surrounding Jim is still alive and super interesting. As always, your dialogue is phenomenal! You know when to go into detail and when to let our imaginations do the work.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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I LOVE this story! I've missed some of it, but the mystery surrounding Jim is still alive and super interesting. As always, your dialogue is phenomenal! You know when to go into detail and when to let our imaginations do the work.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the late reply. School has started and my time for FS is extremely tight. I do appreciate your review and the time it took to read.
