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Comment from krys123
Bill;
I'm sorry I'm out of sixes for this poem really earns it
and should have one more.
Your imagination is truly ingeniously creative and fabulously inventive and where your imagery around is very expressive and descriptive throughout.
Sometimes I just wonder where you get all these poetic ideas for your fantastic 5/7/5 syllabic formats that are also out of this world.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may all your new endeavors be good ones.
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Bill;
I'm sorry I'm out of sixes for this poem really earns it
and should have one more.
Your imagination is truly ingeniously creative and fabulously inventive and where your imagery around is very expressive and descriptive throughout.
Sometimes I just wonder where you get all these poetic ideas for your fantastic 5/7/5 syllabic formats that are also out of this world.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may all your new endeavors be good ones.
Alex
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Alex, for the terrific review. Your enthusiasm is delightful.
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Your sincerely welcome my friend.
Alex
Comment from lindalcreel
You seem to be on a roll lately. All of these humorous poems are so well done, that I can't believe you don't consider yourself a poet. I could envision the scene playing before me and couldn't help but laugh. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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You seem to be on a roll lately. All of these humorous poems are so well done, that I can't believe you don't consider yourself a poet. I could envision the scene playing before me and couldn't help but laugh. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Linda, for the excellent review.
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
Another winner, Bill. I definitely like your style; it's yours. Wit supersedes the rip, and so we need to be reminded in the finale of why the poem was writ. Clever cover-up, and pairing. Kenny
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Another winner, Bill. I definitely like your style; it's yours. Wit supersedes the rip, and so we need to be reminded in the finale of why the poem was writ. Clever cover-up, and pairing. Kenny
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Kenny, for the excellent review.
Comment from JennaG
Oh my goodness! This was definitely the laugh I needed to start my day. I enjoyed this poem so much! I especially loved the first three lines: "Jammin' Jeffrey ripped his pants splittin' during a '50s dance; I see London, I see France". Great rhyming and fun rhythm. Love the chain of events the rip in the pants leads to. This is so well done! It was a true pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Oh my goodness! This was definitely the laugh I needed to start my day. I enjoyed this poem so much! I especially loved the first three lines: "Jammin' Jeffrey ripped his pants splittin' during a '50s dance; I see London, I see France". Great rhyming and fun rhythm. Love the chain of events the rip in the pants leads to. This is so well done! It was a true pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Jenna, for the excellent review.
Comment from Cin
Very entertaining bit of rhyming poetry - reminded me of one of the chants children say in the playground to a clapping sequence :-)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Very entertaining bit of rhyming poetry - reminded me of one of the chants children say in the playground to a clapping sequence :-)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Cin, for the excellent review.