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Jezebel's Look

She thinks she's going to sleep with my husband.

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Comment from SilverFoxes
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I think this woman needs her head read! Who does she think she is coming on to him like that? That is just wrong!
I am glad you have a strong relationship with your husband. Trust is a very important thing in all relationships.


 Comment Written 30-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2008
    Thank you for the terrific review! :-) Me too.
    Jan
Comment from martinC
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Well I think you could qualify as a councilor....alot of time and money would be saved, and you would have alot of interest...
I am pleased that you have a good strong relationship, your husband should be grateful and proud....hope this has helped you vent your frustration and anger, and that this Jezebel got the message

martin

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008
    Thank you so much, Martin. :-) You are too kind. I think she got the message. Time will tell! LOL I really appreciate the review.
    Jan
reply by martinC on 28-Aug-2008
    Your welcome....and if she doesn't get the message....just send her a dead fish in brown paper....and a note from me saying 'she sleeps with the fishes''....lol

    martin
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008
    ROTFLOL I will do that!! :-)
    Jan
Comment from davidray
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Hi Jan,
I realy enjoyed reading something so different from you. Well done! I like the way you included the reader in this, as if you were actually talking to us.
There are a few rough spots, writing wise, with your wordiness and repeating words in the same sentence and such, but I'm not going to bother bringing them up. The truth is ... I enjoyed it and that's all that matters.
Take care, my dear. YOu and your man. :)
David

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
    Thank you so much. I agree with you - it needs some polishing. :-) I wrote it in a hurry as usual! I appreciate your kind words.
    Jan
Comment from Wendyanne
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Hi Janilou. We all have to vent at times or else we would explode lol. You seem as though you go out of your way to make sure your husband is happy. I gave up on that many years ago lol

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
    Thank you so very much! :-)
    Jan
Comment from Kym Jade
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Congratulations, you two have something so special going. It is so pleasing to hear about a happy couple. Hope this Jezebel gets the message and stays away.

Love and blessings

How is Blondy? Hope she isn't tormenting the goats too much.

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
    Thank you so much! :-) Blondie is doing fabulously! I will have to take a photo of her and do a story-update! :-) She thinks she is a goat now. LOL
    Hugs,
    Jan
Comment from Sue-z-Q
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Hi Jan:
Great message full of sage advice. Thousands of gals could benefit from reading it. Might save a few hundred marriages. Most women don't know what to do to keep their man from desiring a little strange stuff. Some men can't seem to function unless it is strange stuff, but they're the unlucky and unfortunate ones. Luckily for both of you, your hubby doesn't fit that mold.

A toast to you both: "May the enchantment last a lifetime."
Sue-z-Q

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2008
    Thank you so much! :-)
    Hugs,
    Jan
Comment from azbukivedi
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Jan, you rock, but sometimes in this essay you sound too defensive. It's almost like you have to please your husband all the time for him to be faithful or happy. What if you have a dark streak for whatever reason and don't feel like cooking or having sex for a few weeks? I don't think it should make a difference...

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2008
    Thanks! :-) I decided to reply in a pm so I could be more specific.
    Hugs,
    Jan
Comment from GerryMacNeil
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Funny, and WONDERFUL, Jan! I wish this were an entry for as "Strong Character" Contest, because it would be a winner just to have the writer being a stronger character than the artwork!

I did an essay on Jezebel in seminary--now there's a case of political slander! LOL

Thanks for venting with such artistry!
Gerry

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2008
    Thank you so much, Gerry! :-)
    Hugs,
    Jan
Comment from Terra Dane
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Enjoyed. Well written with splashes of humor and honesty. You tell a complete little story here, expressing emotion, fear, values. You engage the reader in an intimate slice of life and relationship. Nice job.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
    Thank you very much! :-)
    Jan
Comment from ledford
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Very interesting:-) Great job!

"When she thought I wasn't watching (like I'd ever take my eyes off her)" ... cute:-)

" I love what my husband does, when another woman starts" ... I recommend taking out this comma

Great ending!

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
    Thanks! I took out the comma, or at least I think I did, the other day when I was reading the reviews! If not, I will. LOL Glad you enjoyed this one!
    Jan