Jezebel's Look
She thinks she's going to sleep with my husband.39 total reviews
Comment from SilverFoxes
I think this woman needs her head read! Who does she think she is coming on to him like that? That is just wrong!
I am glad you have a strong relationship with your husband. Trust is a very important thing in all relationships.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2008
I think this woman needs her head read! Who does she think she is coming on to him like that? That is just wrong!
I am glad you have a strong relationship with your husband. Trust is a very important thing in all relationships.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2008
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Thank you for the terrific review! :-) Me too.
Jan
Comment from martinC
Well I think you could qualify as a councilor....alot of time and money would be saved, and you would have alot of interest...
I am pleased that you have a good strong relationship, your husband should be grateful and proud....hope this has helped you vent your frustration and anger, and that this Jezebel got the message
martin
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008
Well I think you could qualify as a councilor....alot of time and money would be saved, and you would have alot of interest...
I am pleased that you have a good strong relationship, your husband should be grateful and proud....hope this has helped you vent your frustration and anger, and that this Jezebel got the message
martin
Comment Written 28-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much, Martin. :-) You are too kind. I think she got the message. Time will tell! LOL I really appreciate the review.
Jan
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Your welcome....and if she doesn't get the message....just send her a dead fish in brown paper....and a note from me saying 'she sleeps with the fishes''....lol
martin
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ROTFLOL I will do that!! :-)
Jan
Comment from davidray
Hi Jan,
I realy enjoyed reading something so different from you. Well done! I like the way you included the reader in this, as if you were actually talking to us.
There are a few rough spots, writing wise, with your wordiness and repeating words in the same sentence and such, but I'm not going to bother bringing them up. The truth is ... I enjoyed it and that's all that matters.
Take care, my dear. YOu and your man. :)
David
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
Hi Jan,
I realy enjoyed reading something so different from you. Well done! I like the way you included the reader in this, as if you were actually talking to us.
There are a few rough spots, writing wise, with your wordiness and repeating words in the same sentence and such, but I'm not going to bother bringing them up. The truth is ... I enjoyed it and that's all that matters.
Take care, my dear. YOu and your man. :)
David
Comment Written 10-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much. I agree with you - it needs some polishing. :-) I wrote it in a hurry as usual! I appreciate your kind words.
Jan
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Janilou. We all have to vent at times or else we would explode lol. You seem as though you go out of your way to make sure your husband is happy. I gave up on that many years ago lol
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
Hi Janilou. We all have to vent at times or else we would explode lol. You seem as though you go out of your way to make sure your husband is happy. I gave up on that many years ago lol
Comment Written 09-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
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Thank you so very much! :-)
Jan
Comment from Kym Jade
Congratulations, you two have something so special going. It is so pleasing to hear about a happy couple. Hope this Jezebel gets the message and stays away.
Love and blessings
How is Blondy? Hope she isn't tormenting the goats too much.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
Congratulations, you two have something so special going. It is so pleasing to hear about a happy couple. Hope this Jezebel gets the message and stays away.
Love and blessings
How is Blondy? Hope she isn't tormenting the goats too much.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much! :-) Blondie is doing fabulously! I will have to take a photo of her and do a story-update! :-) She thinks she is a goat now. LOL
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Sue-z-Q
Hi Jan:
Great message full of sage advice. Thousands of gals could benefit from reading it. Might save a few hundred marriages. Most women don't know what to do to keep their man from desiring a little strange stuff. Some men can't seem to function unless it is strange stuff, but they're the unlucky and unfortunate ones. Luckily for both of you, your hubby doesn't fit that mold.
A toast to you both: "May the enchantment last a lifetime."
Sue-z-Q
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2008
Hi Jan:
Great message full of sage advice. Thousands of gals could benefit from reading it. Might save a few hundred marriages. Most women don't know what to do to keep their man from desiring a little strange stuff. Some men can't seem to function unless it is strange stuff, but they're the unlucky and unfortunate ones. Luckily for both of you, your hubby doesn't fit that mold.
A toast to you both: "May the enchantment last a lifetime."
Sue-z-Q
Comment Written 08-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much! :-)
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from azbukivedi
Jan, you rock, but sometimes in this essay you sound too defensive. It's almost like you have to please your husband all the time for him to be faithful or happy. What if you have a dark streak for whatever reason and don't feel like cooking or having sex for a few weeks? I don't think it should make a difference...
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2008
Jan, you rock, but sometimes in this essay you sound too defensive. It's almost like you have to please your husband all the time for him to be faithful or happy. What if you have a dark streak for whatever reason and don't feel like cooking or having sex for a few weeks? I don't think it should make a difference...
Comment Written 07-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2008
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Thanks! :-) I decided to reply in a pm so I could be more specific.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from GerryMacNeil
Funny, and WONDERFUL, Jan! I wish this were an entry for as "Strong Character" Contest, because it would be a winner just to have the writer being a stronger character than the artwork!
I did an essay on Jezebel in seminary--now there's a case of political slander! LOL
Thanks for venting with such artistry!
Gerry
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2008
Funny, and WONDERFUL, Jan! I wish this were an entry for as "Strong Character" Contest, because it would be a winner just to have the writer being a stronger character than the artwork!
I did an essay on Jezebel in seminary--now there's a case of political slander! LOL
Thanks for venting with such artistry!
Gerry
Comment Written 07-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much, Gerry! :-)
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Terra Dane
Enjoyed. Well written with splashes of humor and honesty. You tell a complete little story here, expressing emotion, fear, values. You engage the reader in an intimate slice of life and relationship. Nice job.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
Enjoyed. Well written with splashes of humor and honesty. You tell a complete little story here, expressing emotion, fear, values. You engage the reader in an intimate slice of life and relationship. Nice job.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
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Thank you very much! :-)
Jan
Comment from ledford
Very interesting:-) Great job!
"When she thought I wasn't watching (like I'd ever take my eyes off her)" ... cute:-)
" I love what my husband does, when another woman starts" ... I recommend taking out this comma
Great ending!
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
Very interesting:-) Great job!
"When she thought I wasn't watching (like I'd ever take my eyes off her)" ... cute:-)
" I love what my husband does, when another woman starts" ... I recommend taking out this comma
Great ending!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2008
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Thanks! I took out the comma, or at least I think I did, the other day when I was reading the reviews! If not, I will. LOL Glad you enjoyed this one!
Jan