Comment from Natalie Walker

Excellent

This is a great poem and creative story. It is a fantastic entry for this contest because the story within this poem is touching and unique. I see no errors. Nice work.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you so much. At first I had a hard time getting started but somewhere this idea came. I looked up a vocabulary list for Moby Dick and saw all these words that I had no idea what meant and then the story began to emerge.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

yeah writing becomes many peoples rudder in life I know it is mine. great write on this good meaning have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

A poetic combination of phrases to
paint your mural with words to correspond
with the picture challenge, merging the
visual with the written.
Well done and good luck

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016

Thank you