Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Well written poem. What more really needs to be said? You captured the essence of this topic very clearly and once again validated what I like to say "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary" and everything else in this life just seems to take care of itself.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thanks so much Brett, for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

Roy another excellent poem from your golden pen. This is an great piece with good flow and more important rhyming that is not forced, Well done indeed with this work.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thanks so much for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.ni like golden, thanks again.

Comment from danpald

Excellent

Beautiful poem of grace
That renders the soul peace
Well the movement of the words
The flow as an old song does grow

Well the faith that moves the heart
Open to words the muse does spark
Let forth this prayer along the realms
For more to cherish the Lord who indwells

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thanks so much for this fine poem, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.

Comment from inside echo

Excellent

A very beautiful poem, a poem written for our Lord. It is very well written, It tells a wonderful story of a deep passionate love, trust and faith. Wonderfully penned. Thank you for sharing. Well done Roy.
echo

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thanks so much for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.

reply by inside echo on 24-May-2015

You are welcome. Thank you for writing it.

reply by the author on 24-May-2015

My pleasure

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Roy...

A great testimony to God's grace, my friend.
Love the peaceful artwork, it gives a feeling of serenity.
The last stanza ties it altogether nicely. Well done.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*:*)


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 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thanks so much Jackie, for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Very good, Roy. This has a Christian mystic feel to it with the lines:

My dream is self that's dying,
so I can know my Lord,

I like this poem, Roy. One of my favorites.

Blessings,

Jay

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 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thanks so much Jay, for this fine, thoughtful review and comments blessings, Roy.