Comment from Shaun Hess

Excellent

Great poem :) I know you haven't seen me in a while, but I decided to get back on here- my subscription ran out on me and school hit so I wasn't really motivated to get on here lol

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Shaun, thank you so much :-) It is good to see you back. Brooke

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a delightfully imaginative tale. I enjoyed reading it. I love the imagination in it. The poem has a wonderful flow. The picture is amazing.
Barbara

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Barbara, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from pattipac

Exceptional

You catch the creative imagination of children, and adults alike, with your bubble blowing green-scaley creature with purple feet. Your clincher is when he scares himself by blowing a bubble, while chomping on some bubble gum.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Patti, thank you so very much :-) I appreciate your thoughtful comments and generous rating. Brooke

Comment from Martin Chan

Excellent

"My Bid Green Friend " is a rhyming quatrain in couplets poem, written with a wonderful imagination with simple choice of words but really good to read and understand. The presentation is also good.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2013

Martin, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Brooke,

The big green thing chewed bubble-gum makes this quite a story. Don't be afraid little boys and girls, just because someone is big and scary.

Good message and fun right. Quite a picture too.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Winslow, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Brocha1

Excellent

This is fantastic. I wish I had a six left. you'd definitely get it on this one. absolutely perfect rhythm and some surprising descriptions.

"that covered seven yards of skin
below two lips that formed a grin,
which showed two sets of jagged teeth,
one group of nine with ten beneath. "

I think this verse is superbly described without being overdone.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Brocha, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OMG Brooke, This is a wonderful kids poem. Wait until Sawyer can read. Is he every in for a treat. And you aren't kidding. This is one of his better expressions. And check out the smile on that proud daddy's face. I would love to see the expression on Miranda's face when she taking all these pictures. LOL Love your poem and so love the picture.. Luff ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

The look on her face is priceless every time she looks at Sawyer - this child just delights her :-) Thank you so much, Linda :-) Brooke

reply by l.raven on 29-Aug-2013

I can understand why. He is really a delightful little guy. Sooooo very happy. xxoo

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

I enjoyed this delightful, whimsical poem. Yes, sometimes we think the HUGE things are the ones to fear. We often misjudge people and situations. Good couplets

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Janice, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A great poem for Sawyer, Brooke. It was fun to read with great rhymes, flow and enjambment. Love the expression on his face. Have a blessed day~Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

Thank you so much, Debbie - he has the best range of expressions I've ever seen :-) Brooke

Comment from lorijean

Excellent

Such a delightful poem love all you wonderful descriptions, you have a wild imagination, well written again and a pleasure to read....

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013

lorijean, thank you so much :-) Brooke