I Wonder What the Waters Hold
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6192 total reviews
Comment from gazzagodbod
ooh ooh i know i know ive actually got my hand up lol its fish thats what the water holds fish oo and probably chips too ill shut up now loved the poem xxgazzaxx
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ooh ooh i know i know ive actually got my hand up lol its fish thats what the water holds fish oo and probably chips too ill shut up now loved the poem xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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gazza, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from words
This poem describes longing so well. Love the rhythm of it, as it seems to mirror the waves rushing in and out.
I do think that you need to board a jet for an adventure ... the artist in you seems to be crying out for an adventure. LOL
Lovely.
Four sixes a month is not enough. You never write below the six level, my talented friend. Hugs, d
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This poem describes longing so well. Love the rhythm of it, as it seems to mirror the waves rushing in and out.
I do think that you need to board a jet for an adventure ... the artist in you seems to be crying out for an adventure. LOL
Lovely.
Four sixes a month is not enough. You never write below the six level, my talented friend. Hugs, d
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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As soon as the jets start handing out free tickets and all the other people involved offer free services, I'm on the next plane! Thank you so much, Diane :-) Brooke
Comment from ELumpkins
Excellent work. This post contains everything, Emotion,Love, and is very well written. I loved it. Your work is always very interesting and well written.
Keep up the good work
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Excellent work. This post contains everything, Emotion,Love, and is very well written. I loved it. Your work is always very interesting and well written.
Keep up the good work
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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ELumpkins, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from lorijean
A very clever poem, wanting to go beyond the boundaries, Nature will always keep her secrets, well written and a pleasure to read.....
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A very clever poem, wanting to go beyond the boundaries, Nature will always keep her secrets, well written and a pleasure to read.....
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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lorijean, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
LOVE THIS LINE: "before it died on shore.
Wonderful last verse, ties it all up into one neat package.
I wonder what the waters hold, 'w' alliteration
if somewhere there's a key,
but whale and wave and sea conspire 3 themes tied together
to keep the mystery.
A rollicking sea shanty with a lyrical cadence adds power to the poem especially if read aloud. Well done. Deserves a 6 but alas none was offered.
Regards:
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LOVE THIS LINE: "before it died on shore.
Wonderful last verse, ties it all up into one neat package.
I wonder what the waters hold, 'w' alliteration
if somewhere there's a key,
but whale and wave and sea conspire 3 themes tied together
to keep the mystery.
A rollicking sea shanty with a lyrical cadence adds power to the poem especially if read aloud. Well done. Deserves a 6 but alas none was offered.
Regards:
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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Thank you so much, Stephen :-) Brooke
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written and a good fun thought provoking poem I wondered how many of us have done the same well done I enjoyed regards Jill
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Yes my friend this is well written and a good fun thought provoking poem I wondered how many of us have done the same well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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Thanks so much, Jill :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
The sea, the sand are huge mysteries and all the creatures living in. If the sea could reveal all the secrets - maybe we wouldn't won't to know all:) Great verse in quatrains.
~Teresa~
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The sea, the sand are huge mysteries and all the creatures living in. If the sea could reveal all the secrets - maybe we wouldn't won't to know all:) Great verse in quatrains.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from 9999pool
Nature is filled with secrets for us to unveil. We will never know all as animals do not talk to us neither do the whales, the wave or the wind, smiles.
Good write and well penned. Interesting look at the wave and the whales within the waters.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
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Nature is filled with secrets for us to unveil. We will never know all as animals do not talk to us neither do the whales, the wave or the wind, smiles.
Good write and well penned. Interesting look at the wave and the whales within the waters.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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Ritchie, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
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Welcome Brooke. My pleasure as always.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :)) Hugs.
Comment from TOMORAL
Bravo! Beautifully penned wonders of the deep mystery, the ocean. I too, have often wondered what secrets may be beyond the horizon where the sea meets the sky. Exceptional.
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Bravo! Beautifully penned wonders of the deep mystery, the ocean. I too, have often wondered what secrets may be beyond the horizon where the sea meets the sky. Exceptional.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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Tomoral, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
With his name written in the sand. LOL! What a photo album that boy will have!
Great rhymes and meter. I enjoyed pondering your mysteries. I also 'wonder what the waters hold", Great stuff, Brooke.
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With his name written in the sand. LOL! What a photo album that boy will have!
Great rhymes and meter. I enjoyed pondering your mysteries. I also 'wonder what the waters hold", Great stuff, Brooke.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2013
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Adrienne, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
