Comment from SteveG1960

Excellent

I love this! I think that it is amazingly full of love and it is expressed very creatively. I also appreciate the fact that you explain the style of poetry and give its history- it allows me to learn while enlightened and I appreciate that. Thanks for a great read!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2010

Thank you, Steve - sorry for the late reply :-) Brooke

Comment from words

Exceptional

Ah, this one took my breath away.

So simple.

So elegant.

Such a wondrous use of the form.

The repeat was especially effective with this.


Now this is a LOVE poem.

See me giving you a standing ovation.!!!!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010

I'm so glad you enjoyed my bit of romantic hyperbole - now I just need to find the guy to go with the eyes. LOL Thanks so much, Diane - you've just made my day, and it has not been an A+ day. :-) Brooke

Comment from Dustman6180

Excellent

A very nice romantic poem, Brooke.
If I had naught but what I've found
within the wonder of your eyes
These are beautiful words. You are a true poet. Well done. Dusty

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010

Thank you, Dusty - I'm pleased you like it :-) Brooke

Comment from ulster3

Excellent

Hello Brooke.
What a happy surprise to find this available today. The triolet is very well formed, but the thoughts expressed in the poetry itself are exceptional. Again, the way you use words is a true gift.
Rebecca

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010

I finally felt inspired and rested up :-) Thank you, Rebecca! Brooke

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Brooke,

Here is the romantic poem that I was
expecting yesterday:) This is a lovely
triolet and I enjoyed your repeating
lines and rhymes.

I also found this line strong and even fun:

"I'd be the envy of the skies"

Well done!

Linda

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010

Linda, thank you :-) Perhaps you were having psychic expectations :-) Brooke

Comment from percival86jack

Excellent

Once more I must congratulate you Brooke on yet another triolet. I swear you must have these things stored up in your basement or attic or somewhere. LOL Hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxx

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2010

Thank you, Jack - sorry this reply is so late, but I had to dig my way out of stacks of triolets to find my way to you. ;-) Brooke

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is lovely. I am slowly (very slowly) becoming more familiar with the different styles of poetry. I liked this one very much. I especially like the placement of the repetitive lines. Very nice work, as always.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010

Thank you, Valerie - gonna make you a convert! :-) Brooke

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

What a wonderful poem. I bet that the admiration and love in those eyes would make everyone jealous for sure. I enjoyed this, and am jealous of this lucky person. Great job.

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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010

Thank you, Joy. This lucky person doesn't exist, so don't get too jealous! LOL Brooke :-)