Fools' Talking Business Today
Talking is their business.76 total reviews
Comment from jandeck
Style and language made it a little hard to understand. But, in other words, fools speak out without thinking of consequences and for self gratification, while the wise do not. Fools do not care about or listen to God's words. The wise know that God's path is the only one for mankind. This is a very good message.
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Style and language made it a little hard to understand. But, in other words, fools speak out without thinking of consequences and for self gratification, while the wise do not. Fools do not care about or listen to God's words. The wise know that God's path is the only one for mankind. This is a very good message.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from MM lives on :)
Alcreator Litt Dear I don't normally copy and paste to show a part to jumped out at me when dealing with stories.. But this made for an all around interesting read.. This paragraph was one I found to be astounding..
"Wisdom is apparently considered not to confine to one's education, degree, title, profession, recognitions, age, sex, religion, community, country or language. One who does not talk foolish against others may be called a wise on this stand. Exceptions are always there but exceptions are not the rules."
Excellent work and thanks for sharing
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Alcreator Litt Dear I don't normally copy and paste to show a part to jumped out at me when dealing with stories.. But this made for an all around interesting read.. This paragraph was one I found to be astounding..
"Wisdom is apparently considered not to confine to one's education, degree, title, profession, recognitions, age, sex, religion, community, country or language. One who does not talk foolish against others may be called a wise on this stand. Exceptions are always there but exceptions are not the rules."
Excellent work and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from AudreyRose
What an intense read. I'll admit I had to reread it a few times but you really got key thinking. You made all of your points and opinions very clear, you tied it into todays world and as I said, you made me think.
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What an intense read. I'll admit I had to reread it a few times but you really got key thinking. You made all of your points and opinions very clear, you tied it into todays world and as I said, you made me think.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from elchupakabra
It is refreshing to see someone who is able to share their spirituality without being sententious, but more importantly accept that their are opposing viewpoints in the world and accept them. I really enjoy your prose, I find it reads extremely well, and while the wise may be few and far between as you have put it, you merit to be described as such. Excellent work again, I always enjoy reading your work.
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It is refreshing to see someone who is able to share their spirituality without being sententious, but more importantly accept that their are opposing viewpoints in the world and accept them. I really enjoy your prose, I find it reads extremely well, and while the wise may be few and far between as you have put it, you merit to be described as such. Excellent work again, I always enjoy reading your work.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from adewpearl
Your opening sentence, especially in its second half, is an example of how you need to work more on mastering the syntax of an English sentence - to get selfish sense of pride feeling and enjoy an exclusive gain of their tongue satisfaction...that just isn't how the language works
may be called a wise on this stand ???
I can't really point out all the break downs in syntax because there are so many
I've mentioned this before, but you need to use concrete illustrative examples to support and explain what you are saying. You obviously think it is better to be wise than to be foolish, but you need to include examples of foolish utterances as opposed to wise utterances. Brooke
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Your opening sentence, especially in its second half, is an example of how you need to work more on mastering the syntax of an English sentence - to get selfish sense of pride feeling and enjoy an exclusive gain of their tongue satisfaction...that just isn't how the language works
may be called a wise on this stand ???
I can't really point out all the break downs in syntax because there are so many
I've mentioned this before, but you need to use concrete illustrative examples to support and explain what you are saying. You obviously think it is better to be wise than to be foolish, but you need to include examples of foolish utterances as opposed to wise utterances. Brooke
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
Comment from Janilou
A very interesting philosophical work. The only thing missing from your commentary is the fact of God's unconditional love, even for the biggest fools in the world.
I didn't find any spag to comment on. Thank you for the interesting read.
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A very interesting philosophical work. The only thing missing from your commentary is the fact of God's unconditional love, even for the biggest fools in the world.
I didn't find any spag to comment on. Thank you for the interesting read.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
