Sink Or Swim Together!
We'll rise or fall together!64 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-syllable poem, Sink or Swim Together, has the proper syllable count and suggests that the world has never been closer together on an issue than now.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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This twenty-syllable poem, Sink or Swim Together, has the proper syllable count and suggests that the world has never been closer together on an issue than now.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Bill Schott,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
~ RP
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent of your twenty syllables in this timely, cautionary
piece. The tone is one of urgency. The theme conveyed is powerful--unity
is crucial in dealing with the pandemic.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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You have made excellent of your twenty syllables in this timely, cautionary
piece. The tone is one of urgency. The theme conveyed is powerful--unity
is crucial in dealing with the pandemic.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Janice Canerdy,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments.
With best wishes
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Beautiful and lovely! You've written well. You as well executed within the laid out rules for the contest. My very best wishes in this regard. Cheers and kudos!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Beautiful and lovely! You've written well. You as well executed within the laid out rules for the contest. My very best wishes in this regard. Cheers and kudos!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello P. Owuamalam,
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Best Wishes'.
With best wishes
~ RP
Comment from Ashtar Zaidi
The only thing i want to say about your poem is 'Awesome'....!!! You have a potential to do something big in this life, beleive yourself, thank you so much for sharing such a interesting words with us... God Bless You... ~Ashtar~
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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The only thing i want to say about your poem is 'Awesome'....!!! You have a potential to do something big in this life, beleive yourself, thank you so much for sharing such a interesting words with us... God Bless You... ~Ashtar~
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hello Ashtar Zaidi,
What a WONDERFUL review this is!
Thank you very much for your so uplifting, and morale boosting comments backed by 'Blessings'.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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