My Last Reply
just to say goodbye136 total reviews
Comment from Cin
I didn't know Pam but your poem is a beautiful way to say goodbye and from what you have written in your Author's notes, is something you not only needed to do but would regret if you didn't. Poem is beautiful.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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I didn't know Pam but your poem is a beautiful way to say goodbye and from what you have written in your Author's notes, is something you not only needed to do but would regret if you didn't. Poem is beautiful.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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HI Cin, Pam's(gungalo) poems are still on the site...go to find a member and you can read them...she was a true friend and a talented writer...always to be remembered...Thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from OLA THOMAS
What a wonderful and well penned tribute to a departed soul. Never too late to express the thoughts of ones heart. A gently rendered tribute.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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What a wonderful and well penned tribute to a departed soul. Never too late to express the thoughts of ones heart. A gently rendered tribute.
ola thomas
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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HI Ola, thank you for a wonderful review...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Linda -Nice tribute to Pam. It's never too late, so don't worry! Better late than never. It shocked us all to hear of her death and as you say we shall miss her - she was such a keen poster. Everyday we got a poem from her. Sleep well Pam. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Hi Linda -Nice tribute to Pam. It's never too late, so don't worry! Better late than never. It shocked us all to hear of her death and as you say we shall miss her - she was such a keen poster. Everyday we got a poem from her. Sleep well Pam. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Hi Dorothy, yes it was...we were all shocked...and so many do miss her...and as you said...may she sleep well...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'My Last Reply' is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. Gungalo was a one-off, and her death left a hole which will never be filled. This talented poet's work is a fitting tribute to a poet and writer who truly cared about others.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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'My Last Reply' is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. Gungalo was a one-off, and her death left a hole which will never be filled. This talented poet's work is a fitting tribute to a poet and writer who truly cared about others.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Hi Duchess, tears...you are so very right...she will never be forgotten...she left her footprints in our souls...thank you so much for your so touching words...and for all your wonderful stars...they will go to Pam...stars for a star...Luff Linda xxoo
Linda, you're so right. Stars for a star. Pam will sigh when she gets them.
Luff, the Duchess xoxo
Comment from Acquired Taste
Lovely message to Pam and I cannot imagine anytime would be too late. She will be missed. Your phrase: just didn't search the sky - is lovely. Am sure she is pleased right now.
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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Lovely message to Pam and I cannot imagine anytime would be too late. She will be missed. Your phrase: just didn't search the sky - is lovely. Am sure she is pleased right now.
AT=/
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Hi AT, I so hope so...she truly is missed...and so loved...thank you so much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from poetbear
To say this choked me up would never explain it.
She was a great friend to me!
I really did plan to go to VI and meet her.
Walking on the beach and getting to know her in person would have been great.
Now,there is a blue butterfly charm that I wear in her memory!
Thanks for this gem!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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To say this choked me up would never explain it.
She was a great friend to me!
I really did plan to go to VI and meet her.
Walking on the beach and getting to know her in person would have been great.
Now,there is a blue butterfly charm that I wear in her memory!
Thanks for this gem!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Hi Maddy, years...I wish I could have met her...I do so miss her...what a wonderful why to remember her....a butterfly charm to remember her by...so very touching...thank you for your wonderful stars...I send them to Pam...stars for a star...thank you!!! luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Hareem.S
This is a good poem about a loss of a very dear fanstory member. Though she has left us but she will be remembered through her works. May her soul rest in peace. Amen.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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This is a good poem about a loss of a very dear fanstory member. Though she has left us but she will be remembered through her works. May her soul rest in peace. Amen.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Hi Hareen, thank you so very much...yes she will be remembered...thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from dennis0530
Writing about a last farewell that the author says is "too late."
But since we believe that each of us has a soul, then "too late" is just our mortal human label. Because indeed, if we are soulless, then even a "timely" goodbye seems empty.
The writing is no doubt sad but should not be regretful.
"Please forgive me for posting this so late" is as much a plea to Pam and the readers but so much so also for the writer. Couple this by remembering your ties and keeping alive the memory of your bond.
Good souls always find their place in "good places."
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Writing about a last farewell that the author says is "too late."
But since we believe that each of us has a soul, then "too late" is just our mortal human label. Because indeed, if we are soulless, then even a "timely" goodbye seems empty.
The writing is no doubt sad but should not be regretful.
"Please forgive me for posting this so late" is as much a plea to Pam and the readers but so much so also for the writer. Couple this by remembering your ties and keeping alive the memory of your bond.
Good souls always find their place in "good places."
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Hi Dennis, yes they do...and Pam was...and still is a good soul...in Heaven...Thank you for a wonderful review...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Quire's Gal
very nice tribute to Pam. I like the way you organized this. this is my favorite part...
I tried to find
you everywhere
just didn't search the sky.
I'm sure she is looking down and reading your lovely poem.
Take care and enjoy your week. Drusilla1
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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very nice tribute to Pam. I like the way you organized this. this is my favorite part...
I tried to find
you everywhere
just didn't search the sky.
I'm sure she is looking down and reading your lovely poem.
Take care and enjoy your week. Drusilla1
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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HI Drusilla, thank you so very much for a great review...I hope she is...thank you!!! Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello I. Raven,
Beautifully worded 'your last reply to Pam' is really laudable!
Wording is simple as well as impressive.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout the poem.
Lovely rhyming scheme with lively imagery.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
"...you left me with a sigh
now in return
I say to you
this is my last reply
hey you, Linda luff
just want to say good-bye"
Marvelous!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Hello I. Raven,
Beautifully worded 'your last reply to Pam' is really laudable!
Wording is simple as well as impressive.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout the poem.
Lovely rhyming scheme with lively imagery.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
"...you left me with a sigh
now in return
I say to you
this is my last reply
hey you, Linda luff
just want to say good-bye"
Marvelous!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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HI RP, thank you for a wonderful review...and for all your stars...just miss her...and wish I could have said good-bye...I love your review...luff Linda xxoo
